NotWise
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I'm on my third story now written mostly without dialog tags, and I'm starting to see where it's going. This is self-analysis. I know other people are experimenting with tagless dialog, and I'd love to hear your experience.
Writing with tags (not more than one per paragraph), I used them to slow the pace of the story as well as to clarify the speaker.
There's more action when I'm writing with minimal tags. I need action in place of the tag to focus attention on the speaker, and without tags the pace of the story is not as controlled.
In my stories, there is a tendency for that extra action to create tension. With the first two stories, I was most concerned that the speaker was clear. With my third I suddenly need to control the tension. Sometimes that added tension is a good thing and sometimes it's out of place.
If you've tried it, how has it worked for you?
Writing with tags (not more than one per paragraph), I used them to slow the pace of the story as well as to clarify the speaker.
There's more action when I'm writing with minimal tags. I need action in place of the tag to focus attention on the speaker, and without tags the pace of the story is not as controlled.
In my stories, there is a tendency for that extra action to create tension. With the first two stories, I was most concerned that the speaker was clear. With my third I suddenly need to control the tension. Sometimes that added tension is a good thing and sometimes it's out of place.
If you've tried it, how has it worked for you?
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