Writers I need your help

[orgasmsgalore]

Hi. Many of you are writers on here. I am not good at it so I am asking for help. I want to send some erotic texts to my man. They only need be short. I could write 'I want to suck your cock' but that is lame. Could you guys help me out here?

I may not have posted this in the right place. Move it if required.

 

[CWatson]

I think what you're going to need is a string of texts. When it comes to erotic content, it's all about details. "I want to suck your cock" is thrilling to find out, but--as you correctly identified--does not exactly inspire instant cockstand. If, on the other hand, you take some time describing what you're going to do to his cock, in seriously graphic detail... Well, that's a different matter.

 

[SweetErika]

i wnt u to lick every inch of my bloody cunt so sex actuly feels good during my period

Or is that too long?

Seriously, just say what you like/want, then add descriptive adjectives and adverbs, like hot, wet, slick, dripping, rock hard, big, gorgeous, amazing, slowly, fast, throbbing...

There are some threads on good phone sex and dirty talk in the Blank Manual sticky and there's tons of info on describing, writing arousing things and good erotic communication in both the Writers' Resources and How To story section on the story side of the site. Take a look around and use this opportunity to hone your dirty talk/text skills.

 

[qrayze]

i wnt u to lick every inch of my bloody cunt so sex actuly feels good during my period

Or is that too long?

Seriously, just say what you like/want, then add descriptive adjectives and adverbs, like hot, wet, slick, dripping, rock hard, big, gorgeous, amazing, slowly, fast, throbbing...

There are some threads on good phone sex and dirty talk in the Blank Manual sticky and there's tons of info on describing, writing arousing things and good erotic communication in both the Writers' Resources and How To story section on the story side of the site. Take a look around and use this opportunity to hone your dirty talk/text skills.

pure awesomesauce lol

 

[orgasmsgalore]

I will check out those other threads. Thanks.

 

[subwannabe]

It really depends on what he likes and what his fantasies might be. The fantasy route is what I would do if I were you. Send him a string of texts concerning living out one of his fantasies that you haven't done yet. "I want to suck your cock" just doesn't sound as good as "I want you to tie me up" or "I bought a riding crop for us".

 

[micky4play]

I think what you're going to need is a string of texts. When it comes to erotic content, it's all about details. "I want to suck your cock" is thrilling to find out, but--as you correctly identified--does not exactly inspire instant cockstand. If, on the other hand, you take some time describing what you're going to do to his cock, in seriously graphic detail... Well, that's a different matter.

I like the string of text idea...
1st might be something like, "I was thinking....."
2nd, "...you might like to play with my tits...."
3rd, "....while I was sucking your dick."

 

[JuanVato]

I love these that I have received.

"Just out of the shower-now on my bed in a towel. Are you hungry? I need sausage."

"Good morning papacito! Miss you!"--attached a photo of her hand holding a peeled banana in a pumping grip.

"Thinking of you. I'm biting my bottom lip thinking of our evening on the balcony."

This one I LOVED!
"Meet me at my place at noon. I'm your lunch."

 

[JustaSCOUNDREL]

Obviously I am late to this thread. I do not claim to be a good writer but...

!st. I love the feel of your hands in my hair...

2nd. Guiding my head...

3rd. My lips...

4th. Sealed tightly...

5th. Around your...

6th. Thickness...

7th. As it plunders my...

8th. Hot...

9th. Wet...

10th. Needy...

11th. Greedy...

13th. Mouth...

14th. MY mouth that longs for your cum to fill it.

15th. I LOVE you...


I will guarantee if my wife sent that series to me I would check out of work early and would break most speed limit laws on the way home.

The next one:

!st. On my hands...

2nd. And knees...

I am sure you get the idea now. Take it from there.

Hope this helps.

Mike S.