Write the scariest story you can in two sentences

[sheablue]

I came across this blurb, and had to find out where it came from, it was so creepy and cool:

I began tucking him into bed and he says "Daddy check for monsters under my bed." I look underneath for his amusement and I see another him, under the bed, staring back at me, quivering and whispering "Daddy, there's somebody on my bed."



I discovered it was from a contest to write the scariest story you can in two sentences. In honor of the spookiest month of the year, anyone want to give it a go?

I'll come back with mine after I ponder for a bit.

 

[Zeb_Carter]

"The test came back. I'm pregnant!" said the single white female.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

"Wilson College? Never heard of no Wilson College," I said.
"No! Not Wilson College, Wilson Middle School!" She squealed.

 

[JKendallDane]

I opened the door in trepidation as I recognized the man standing on my stoop.

"Hello...I'm Steve Kroft of '60 Minutes' and have some questions for you."

 

[johneb87]

She slowly chewed at her bottom lip as she brought herself to confess to her older lover. Taking his hand she whispered, "Babe, I'm actually your daughter."

 

[Tio_Narratore]

I came across this blurb, and had to find out where it came from, it was so creepy and cool:

I began tucking him into bed and he says "Daddy check for monsters under my bed." I look underneath for his amusement and I see another him, under the bed, staring back at me, quivering and whispering "Daddy, there's somebody on my bed."



I discovered it was from a contest to write the scariest story you can in two sentences. In honor of the spookiest month of the year, anyone want to give it a go?

I'll come back with mine after I ponder for a bit.

It reminds me of the framed cartoon my daughter gave me for Christmas. She said it reflected the reality of growing up with an Anthropologist father. It depicted a father addressing his son, in bed to go to sleep:

"See - there aren't any monsters in the corner. It's just a pile of old skulls."

 

[jomar]

There's a political joke in here somewhere.

 

[Pompeii]

It was true love with His hips pumping into me made me roll my head back, riling me, tightening my inside for the final blow. Coming, coming so close, my eyes lolled to the wall, where a mirror laid to see the knife pulling back to arch into my chest.



. . .That's a writing challenge if I've ever seen one XD.

 

[Zeb_Carter]

"Wilson College? Never heard of no Wilson College," I said.
"No! Not Wilson College, Wilson Middle School!" She squealed.

Yo Jim! That's six sentences. Getting too old to count now?

 

[lovecraft68]

It was just announced that president Obama is once again going to shit on the laws of this country. Today Warlord Obama announced he will revoke the two term limit and run again.

If I was allowed a third sentence it would be. "That is if the most embarrassing president this country has ever had can get the government to start up again."

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Yo Jim! That's six sentences. Getting too old to count now?

Ageist puke!

 

[TheeGoatPig]

He sat in the dark waiting. There was no hiding from the Yodas out for blood.

 

[sheablue]

C'mon, you guys! I want to read some Halloweeny type scary stuff! You're not even trying!!!

 

[Tio_Narratore]

He slid gently between her welcoming thighs and brought his lips to her neck. As she wrapped her arms around him, she glanced up to the mirrored ceiling, but saw only her own reflection.

 

[johneb87]

C'mon, you guys! I want to read some Halloweeny type scary stuff! You're not even trying!!!

I walked into the door after a wonderful date and picked up yesterday's paper. My heart stopped when I reached the obituary section, there was a picture of her!

 

[desertslave]

"Good morning," said the man in the suit, when I opened the door. "I'm from the IRS, and I need to talk with you about this bounced check."

 

[Airka4real]

When we asked our daughter the name of her new imaginary friend, she said "Caitlin, my sister!"

We had never told her about Caitlin, her stillborn identical twin.

 

[sheablue]

My 6-year-old daughter climbs into my bed every night, crying about the boogeyman. If she could only describe him, maybe we could finally catch the monster who killed her 3 years ago.

 

[JustaSCOUNDREL]

When we asked our daughter the name of her new imaginary friend, she said "Caitlin, my sister!"

We had never told her about Caitlin, her stillborn identical twin.

Damn, you just gave me the shivers. Spooky as hell, nicely done.


sheablue My 6-year-old daughter climbs into my bed every night, crying about the boogeyman. If she could only describe him, maybe we could finally catch the monster who killed her 3 years ago.


Sheablue, I got very much the same reaction from your story as I did from Airka4real's story.

I am not a fan of scary stories. I do thank you for your chilling contributions, but you'll please excuse me if this is my last visit. Thank you.

Mike

 

[johneb87]

Growing up, I remember looking out my window and into the woods. I always saw her, the little girl in the white dress.

 

[Bramblethorn]

"There is only one soul in the universe, caught in a loop of reincarnation, back and forth forever," said the angel. "You will be everybody in history, one by one, and experience everything that happens to them."

 

[TE999]

"Thanks so much for giving me a ride, mister," the little girl piped happily.

He didn't answer, of course, being drained of blood.

 

[johneb87]

He struggled against the restraints, the gag stifling his scream. "Bobo wants to play," the clown maniacally laughed as he started the chainsaw.

 

[rubydlite]

Hearing the front door slam, they both jumped out of bed. "I thought you said your husband wasn't home until tomorrow!"

 

[PennLady]

Anyone notice that the really creepy ones on this thread involve kids? brrrr. The others are scary/amusing, but those are scary/creepy.