Write our own Limericks, one line at a time

[msmaggie]

While lounging one day at the beach
I saw her ass was as soft as a peach
I gave it a stroke
And found she was soaked
and I lost the power of speech!

She then rolled on to her back

 

[Adre]

She then rolled on to her back
And I fit myself into her crack

 

[weespanner]

She then rolled on to her back
And I fit myself into her crack
she gasped aloud

 

[msmaggie]

She then rolled on to her back
And I fit myself into her crack
she gasped aloud
and that drew a crowd

 

[weespanner]

She then rolled on to her back
And I fit myself into her crack
she gasped aloud
and that drew a crowd
as I fucked her til she was slack

 

[msmaggie]

While lounging one day at the beach
I saw her ass was as soft as a peach
I gave it a stroke
And found she was soaked
and I lost the power of speech!

She then rolled on to her back
And I fit myself into her crack
she gasped aloud
and that drew a crowd
as I fucked her til she was slack

The crowd started to cheer

 

[weespanner]

The crowd started to cheer
as I groaned into her ear

 

[Englandboy2]

The crowd started to cheer
as I groaned into her ear
They cried out for more

 

[weespanner]

The crowd started to cheer
as I groaned into her ear
They cried out for more
as I pounded her core

 

[whalee1]

If I may offer an observation....

The rhythm of a limerick is such that the first two lines of verse need more syllables than these first two lines below:

The crowd started to cheer
as I groaned into her ear.

Think of the classic:

There once was a man from Madras
Who had two balls made of brass[
In inclement weather
They played stormy weather
And lightening shot out of his ass/I]

 

[weespanner]

If I may offer an observation....

The rhythm of a limerick is such that the first two lines of verse need more syllables than these first two lines below:

The crowd started to cheer
as I groaned into her ear.

Think of the classic:

There once was a man from Madras
Who had two balls made of brass[
In inclement weather
They played stormy weather
And lightening shot out of his ass/I]

you are, of course, right whalee....I usually go with the rhythm of the first line.....if it's shorter, a longer 2nd doesn't fit.....why does that sound so dirty?

anyway..it becomes poetry, rather than a limerick

 

[Adre]

The crowd started to cheer
as I groaned into her ear
They cried out for more
as I pounded her core
And then I ordered a beer

 

[Jett_73]

you are, of course, right whalee....I usually go with the rhythm of the first line.....if it's shorter, a longer 2nd doesn't fit.....why does that sound so dirty?

anyway..it becomes poetry, rather than a limerick

You still going Spanner? Impressive stamina!

Line:

Spanner's a marathon poet

 

[Adre]

you are, of course, right whalee....I usually go with the rhythm of the first line.....if it's shorter, a longer 2nd doesn't fit.....why does that sound so dirty?

Hi Spanner...let's see if my longer fits into your shorter I enjoyed playing with you today

 

[kendra1980]

you are, of course, right whalee....I usually go with the rhythm of the first line.....if it's shorter, a longer 2nd doesn't fit.....why does that sound so dirty?

anyway..it becomes poetry, rather than a limerick

Not the thread police but this is a limerick thread, NOT a poetry thread...I'm not pedantic, but yeah...limericks Some folks, in fact, left this thread because...uhm. Yeah, limericks.


Her vibrators were all worn out

 

[msmaggie]

Her vibrators were all worn out
So Kendra began to pout

 

[Jett_73]

Her vibrators were all worn out
So Kendra began to pout
Nat, go to the store

 

[Adre]

Her vibrators were all worn out
So Kendra began to pout
Nat, go to the store
I'll need four more

 

[Jett_73]

Her vibrators were all worn out
So Kendra began to pout
Nat, go to the store
I'll need four more
And this time make sure that they're stout.

 

[Adre]

I think I'll go out for a swim

 

[Jett_73]

I think I'll go out for a swim
And there at the pool, so trim

 

[VioletFlame]

I think I'll go out for a swim
And there at the pool, so trim
A woman without a suit

 

[Jett_73]

I think I'll go out for a swim
And there at the pool, so trim
A woman without a suit
I think I cried, "Woot!"

 

[VioletFlame]

I think I'll go out for a swim
And there at the pool, so trim
A woman without a suit
I think I cried, "Woot!"
As I watched her float on the brim

 

[Jett_73]

I think I'll go out for a swim
And there at the pool, so trim
A woman without a suit
I think I cried, "Woot!"
As I watched her float on the brim

She opened one lazy eye