Would like suggestions for my Veyour/ Reluctant Wife/ Interracial series

[yellowhammer124]

Would like suggestions for my Voyeur/ Reluctant Wife/ Interracial series

It is a story about a nineteen year old blonde girl who married her dad's 52 year old best friend. He convinces her to strip at a local strip club on amateur night and she ends up being taken reluctantly by a group of black men. I have 2 chapters written and they are below and am working on the third. I think it will be the best yet. I would like feed back and suggestions.

Chapter 1: http://www.literotica.com/s/lisa-cums-home-1

Chapter 2: http://www.literotica.com/s/ron-cums-to-lisa

 

[stlgoddessfreya]

Your story obviously hits the right buttons for a lot of people, judging by the number of people who left positive comments and favorited it.

Do you want to keep adding parts to expand that fantasy or do you want to write to become a better writer?