Would anyone like to proof for me?

MartinConteggio

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While I have many years experience writing, I have not written any fiction since I was in high school 10+ years ago. So I would like to get some proofers to go over my work before I release anything.

I have written 2 parts of a series depicting a Slave Market training stable. The main character of the story is a mid-20s woman who gets rosy ideas in her head about slavery from reading too much nonsense online, and how she copes with the reality after she has given herself over to the stable. This is not about D/s or typical BDSM scenarios, this is look at some people far more brave (and perhaps foolish) than most of us.

Content Warnings:
M/F, BDSM, Extreme Degradation, Anal, semi-reluc, WS, Beast, and Scat*

*There is only one scene with scat in it, I tend to avoid it myself since it turns my stomach, but it is an important part of the plot and development of 2 characters.

Drug abuse is used as a plot device for mind control, instead of the typical cheesy hypnosis and magic nonsense common in mind control stories. As a recovering substance abuser, I depict the horror of chemical dependency in a very real and grim light. So much so that I feel I must warn that this is "Horror Porn", and if you have ever experienced chemical dependency yourself, or ever had a bad trip on acid.. this may not be something you want to read.


If you feel you are going to be truly interested in this sort of story and will be able to really help me with proofing please PM me with your email address and I'll send the first 2 episodes of this series over.

Thanks,
-Martin
 
Possibly the best place to go to get optimal help in critique, editing hints etc., is the Story Discussion Circle Forum at Lit. From what I have seen it is a good place to go to have your writing looked over and commented on before submitting it formally for publication. Good luck.:)

Catalina:rose:
 
I've read the first two installments that you sent to me. I'm still formulating my response, but never fear -- it's coming!
 
I am a volunteer editor here (see my signature...). I am happy to help anyone.
 
and uhm.... how are you going to pay us for this large favor? i think some dark chocolate would be a good start.
 
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