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[Snoe72]

Very simple idea with complex but plenty of depth for a real story and some rather fun kinks.

So who would read a misadventure of a young magician seeking out a potion for immortality only to find out its side effects too late. It bestows beauty but it is a more feminine beauty, altering him to the point of androgyny. Also his libido is ramped up but his appearance and the charming aura of the potion only seems to work on men drawing unwanted attention...at first.

The story the turns to a search for a cure through a fantasy world, in which this sexy little creature must struggle against his lust and that of those he meets.

So what do you think is it worth writing?

 

[Carnevil9]

Interesting concept. You say it ramps up his libido - does it ramp up his libido to want women while he can only attract men? Or does it ramp up his libido in general so that he can enjoy the attention of the men?

Two very different stories, but both would be worth reading.

 

[Snoe72]

I'd say in general and despite his previous orientation. I think it'd be fun if he was fiercely hetero before hand

 

[Carnevil9]

I agree. I would have him indulge in all sorts of sex, but be conflicted about it. But don't let him enjoy it too much, or it would remove his need to search for a cure.

Oh! He is not searching for a TOTAL cure, just a cure that let's him retain his immortality and sexuality, but takes away the femininity.

 

[Snoe72]

Precisely my thoughts on it
not to mention the added fun of superstitious mortals "QUICK SILENCE HIM BEFORE HE CASTS A SPELL!" "No sire yo must bind their hands they cannot cast spells without the use of their hands." "Search him for anything...dangerous."

Ofcourse what young man wouldn't want to be ageless and capable.
Added to that possible mythical meetings other mages, and witches...maybe his mentor a manipulative lady sorcerous, perhaps a bit angry that some of her ingredients were used so selfishly.

 

[Snoe72]

That's it I've decided to write this.
And on that subject I'd love to brainstorm with eager would be readers helps me think...he'll I'd be open to a co-writer.

Its a bit heavy on the story side so far but I've always enjoyed building a believable world around my characters.

Thanks for reading
Snoe

 

[BellwetherLady]

Please write it. I would love to read it.

 

[Snoe72]

I certainly intend to I hope I don't disappoint.

The first chapter is going to be setting up the character the world and a bit of hot gooey man on man at the end...pun intended.

 

[katt2007]

The trouble with your plot is that he has no incentive (or coersion) to dress femininely. If it were only pysiological he would trey to wear very many clothes to compensate, whereas presumably you want him to wear girly clothes.

 

[Snoe72]

No no no. You misunderstood.
I want him to try to hide himself to not look female in spite of his altered appearence.

This potion he takes changes his body from an average guy to a male with feminine curves and facial features while remaining distinctly male. While the glamour or charm that he's cursed with lures other men in and drives them to lust some in more intense manners than others.

Its not about cross dressing and n which I've little interest its more about exposure and reluctance with the ever so sweet spice of embarrassment and objectification.

The fight is basically avoiding those that would take advantage of his predicament while searching for a cure while his own condition makes that all the more difficult.

 

[Snoe72]

almost there!
One sex scene away from editing!! Woot woot

 

[Carnevil9]

Be sure to let us know when it is live! With a link, please......

 

[Snoe72]

Absolutely just editing now.
may take a bit I like to thorough and might add more as I'm doing that.

 

[BellwetherLady]

Absolutely just editing now.
may take a bit I like to thorough and might add more as I'm doing that.

Take your time. Quality is worth waiting for!

 

[Wolfias]

Sounds extremely interesting I'm definitely in if you'll have me?