Will Anyone Look Over My Daddy/Daughter Story?

[SugarLacedLie]

I wrote a Daddy/Daughter story a few months ago, and I would like someone to look over it for me. I'd appericate it greatly.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

I wrote a Daddy/Daughter story a few months ago, and I would like someone to look over it for me. I'd appericate it greatly.

I'll bite if you're still in need. PM me, paste in the story, and give me an email to return it to. Include the preferred format, otherwise I'll send as Word 97 - 2003. If you're quick I can have it back to you tomorrow (Sunday, US CST).

My stories, in case you need references:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=479657&page=submissions