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There's nothing wrong with a few strokers. Just don't overdo it because it might not be good for your eyesight.![]()
The OP contention was bogus and/or a troll. Drop it.
I used to run the Authors' Hangout Last Place contest to highlight contest entries that were unpopular. Some of the Last Place winning stories were very good indeed.
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From somewhat successful SF author Larry Niven -- Niven's Laws of Writing:
This from the scion of great illicit wealth who had the luxury of taking a decade to learn how to write. We probably don't have so long to master it. But we can aspire to quality writing, right? Hey, even 'low' is a quality.
- Writers who write for other writers should write letters.
- Never be embarrassed or ashamed about anything you choose to write. (Think of this before you send it to a market.)
- Stories to end all stories on a given topic, don't.
- It is a sin to waste the reader's time.
- If you've nothing to say, say it any way you like. Stylistic innovations, contorted story lines or none, exotic or genderless pronouns, internal inconsistencies, the recipe for preparing your lover as a cannibal banquet: feel free. If what you have to say is important and/or difficult to follow, use the simplest language possible. If the reader doesn't get it, then let it not be your fault.
- Everybody talks first draft.
PS: "There is a technical, literary term for those who mistake the opinions and beliefs of characters in a novel for those of the author. The term is 'idiot'."
I confess, I tried to read one, just to see what the fuss was about. Kinky romance being my thing too.
If she had posted it here, it would've been lucky to get in the 4 range. What a load of tripe.
As a complete newbie who REALLY had to build up the courage to post my first story on Lit (and haven't posted since) I think your comment negates the value of improvement. For me, few experiences on this site have been better than getting a great VE who is detailed but not an arse and being followed by writers that I know write better than me. I would say that maybe you need to refine your searches and expand your mind a bit.
What’s a VE, please?
I've not asked Mr Niven, but my sorta-sis with multiple titles on the NYT-BS list hinted that anybody can and will write a lousy first draft with too many wrong words in wrong places. It's worrisome, or worse. Paid authors chatting on their work hover over the current first draft. First draft ain't shit. Shut up and rewrite.All food for thought. What does number six mean?Hypoxia said:6. Everybody talks first draft.
Mine are becoming so good that when I reach perfection I'll have nothing left to say. What a pickle.The quality of *my* stories is improving, on the whole.
Ah, the InterWebz we inhabit! We have seen the enemy -- and it's us.Quality of readers, definitely dropping. I blame the Internet.
I've not asked Mr Niven, but my sorta-sis with multiple titles on the NYT-BS list hinted that anybody can and will write a lousy first draft with too many wrong words in wrong places. It's worrisome, or worse. Paid authors chatting on their work hover over the current first draft. First draft ain't shit. Shut up and rewrite.
I wasn't aware that LIT was a pr0n marketplace. IMHO Sturgeon's Law (*) applies: 95% of everything (especially writing) is crap. Laurel filters the worst here, much to our relief.Perhaps the market has become saturated? And if the demand is not there, maybe (some) of the (more) talented people will not be as motivated to do the writing?
Yes to all of this! Exactly what I try to do. I might not do it well...but I try.Wow. Am I late to the party. Anyway, here are somethings I have to say. To whom ever it is of use.
But first to Auden, or whatever the OP's name, specifically.
Guten Tag. Bitte seien Sie kein Arschloch.
I can't speak for the decline in quality since I'm a relative newcomer. Ten years ago I shouldn't have been on this site. And when I did come here, I too had difficulties finding stories that I really liked. So here's my five-step plan that will get you back on track:
Step 1: Write what you'd like to read.
Step 2: See who else likes your writing and see whom they follow and favorite.
Step 3: Read that writing.
Step 4: If you don't like that writing, you can question their judgment. But if you do so, their opinion on your story becomes equally as invalid as that of the story you've just read.
Step 5: Repeat the cycle but improve.
You're very welcome.
Then the rest:
- Never read 5SoG and wouldn't because of the borderline plagiarism that I do not approve of.
- Twilight, on the other hand, is alright. It was what the teenage me consumed.
- Fiction, imo, is fantasy, and everything goes. That includes breaking whatever commonly accepted BDSM protocol there is. I do not tell incest writers that their incest is wrong either.
- Anaïs Nin is alright but I dare say Literotica has many better stories up on its site. Nin's stories, at least to me, feel a little pointless half the time.
- There was probably something else that was on the past 7 pages that was worth addressing but I forget.