Comentarista82
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Would you rather read:
1) About a father / daughter role
1) a seductive female scene
1) a girl taken willingly
1)a college girl trying to get her grades up
1)one on one (regardless of willing or forced)
2)punishment involving more sexual content--more like in a playful way as it heightens some women's arousal and ability to orgasm if you're going to use it
Since you're asking (and some posters think other posters MUST be given "permission" by the thread starter to speak or they are out of line, so that's why I state that), remember that however you paint your girl, she and others have to be flawed as characters to get the most bang for the buck and experience/resolve enough conflicts to mature as a character because this really helps drive the plot--they're simply more interesting when they have enough issues to overcome. Now how you choose to do that is up to you, but if the characters start out close to perfect, you have no story and if you punish one or many too much you'll alienate readers (many modern day movies and soap operas overdo this since 1996) or bore them.
A lot of this really depends on your category too. If you want to make this a non-consensual/reluctance, then you take the doubting/insecure girl at least sort of duped into having sex, perhaps convinced it will help her self esteem; if you want it to be in the Consensual Sex category, then perhaps she's the ultra-assertive seductress that enthralls a guy to be with her and he's entranced by her knowing what she wants. Obviously if it's father/daughter, that's the Incest category and many posters there will tell you if they just start coupling like wild animals it may titillate the baser readership that could care less about character development yet turn off the ones that want to see them denying the attraction/fighting it/teasing each other in sometimes subconscious or innocuous ways, to test the waters/then they slowly explore the attraction/finally give in/fully consummate it without reservation.
Of course, in the end the story is your baby, so to keep readers focused on what you want, put a kind of preface on ch. 1 (if it's going to be longer than that) on what your focus is and what they can expect to see. That way if you want constructive criticism still, you can place certain things off limits and shape your input from readers possible comments accordingly.
1) About a father / daughter role
1) a seductive female scene
1) a girl taken willingly
1)a college girl trying to get her grades up
1)one on one (regardless of willing or forced)
2)punishment involving more sexual content--more like in a playful way as it heightens some women's arousal and ability to orgasm if you're going to use it
Since you're asking (and some posters think other posters MUST be given "permission" by the thread starter to speak or they are out of line, so that's why I state that), remember that however you paint your girl, she and others have to be flawed as characters to get the most bang for the buck and experience/resolve enough conflicts to mature as a character because this really helps drive the plot--they're simply more interesting when they have enough issues to overcome. Now how you choose to do that is up to you, but if the characters start out close to perfect, you have no story and if you punish one or many too much you'll alienate readers (many modern day movies and soap operas overdo this since 1996) or bore them.
A lot of this really depends on your category too. If you want to make this a non-consensual/reluctance, then you take the doubting/insecure girl at least sort of duped into having sex, perhaps convinced it will help her self esteem; if you want it to be in the Consensual Sex category, then perhaps she's the ultra-assertive seductress that enthralls a guy to be with her and he's entranced by her knowing what she wants. Obviously if it's father/daughter, that's the Incest category and many posters there will tell you if they just start coupling like wild animals it may titillate the baser readership that could care less about character development yet turn off the ones that want to see them denying the attraction/fighting it/teasing each other in sometimes subconscious or innocuous ways, to test the waters/then they slowly explore the attraction/finally give in/fully consummate it without reservation.
Of course, in the end the story is your baby, so to keep readers focused on what you want, put a kind of preface on ch. 1 (if it's going to be longer than that) on what your focus is and what they can expect to see. That way if you want constructive criticism still, you can place certain things off limits and shape your input from readers possible comments accordingly.
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