What's up, Doc?

[rusty69]

Hi, kids.

Hey, I've been working on a story, and I would like to ask you guys for some feedback on it - it's called Doctor's visit:

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=c&story_id=873

I welcome constructive criticism, as long as it is constructive. I'm not asking anyone to add to it (unless you want to). It's immersive from a guy's point of view. Sorry, Ladies, but you gals can still let me know what you think of it.

 

[Torg]

New Management

I adopted this great story awhile ago, but haven't made any announcements here. So, here goes.

I've started adding threads to the storyline where our hero helps Julie the nurse by covering for her with the doctor when she breaks the last oral thermometer. She takes him to lunch and offers to fuck him at her dorm later that night as payment for saving her job.

They start with She lets you in and continues through Kathy notices, She can watch or join in, and Kathy Fluffs.

Enjoy!