What Lucy did on holiday

[goldfinger]

This story is up and running now at present four pages deep. I have had good contributions from Kendal6969. Thank you and keep up the good work.

I have tried to put in plenty on options moving the various threads in different directions. Have a read: http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=c&story_id=866 or make a contribution. All welcome.

 

[goldfinger]

Another new thread added by Zingiber. Thanks and keep them coming. The story has eight threads leading off from the first apge so lots of directions to go in.

 

[goldfinger]

Just added a new thread in the Ride into Town/ Dominic storyline.

 

[goldfinger]

I have added a couple of threads under the Ride to town/ explore town storyline. I don't want to write it all on my own. How about making a post?

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/index.php?

 

[lilguy]

woe how you get all those extra choices

 

[goldfinger]

Someone explained how to do this in an earlier thread. I set up my four threads and in the meantime had treceived four from Kedahl6969. I just approved these and they all appeared.

Thanks for the new thread lilguy.

I have also received four hot posts from kendal6969 which keep the story motoring along and lucy getting dirtier and dirtier.

 

[goldfinger]

I have just added a thread to continue Kendahl6969's thread on buying a webcam. Lucy's ready to log on and show herself off.

 

[goldfinger]

A couple more threads added today. Follow the Surf the net, Find the candle story line and discover out how Lucy's aunt reacts to finding Lucy using the candle.

Link in the first thread of this chain.

 

[goldfinger]

Thanks lilguy for a third choice in the ride into town thread

Heres the link:http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?

 

[goldfinger]

Please ignore the link above. For some reason i can noyt get a link to lilguy's thread so heres a link to the one before it

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=866&next_id=5934

 

[goldfinger]

A few more threads added today. In particular A party by the pool. i think this may be one of the best threads I have written but who knows/ Let me know what you think. All comments welcome.

Heres the link

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/index.php?dx=r&m=M13&story_id=866&next_id=6521

Good, it seems to be working now.

 

[Guest]

Kendahl6969 is my most prolific contributor todate. many thanks. A new thread today and I have added one to Kendhal6969's original rthread/story that starts with 2conect my laptop to the internet"

I seem to be having problems cutting and pasting links so can't put one in at the mo. Use the link in the first thread, choose the 8th thread and it just reads straight through.

 

[Guest]

Up to 65 threads and two more hoy contributions from Kendahl6969 plus a new contributor Chervil. Thank you both.

The story is now up to six pages deep in places and Lucy is getting herself into all sorts of situations. Have a look and post a comment on this thread.http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=866&next_id=5934

 

[Guest]

A couple more threads added. I can't seem to cut and post the address so go the the story using the link in the first post in this thread and then follow Surf the Net and then The Doorbell Rings to reach them.

Lucy's off to a party and it looks like she might get in trouble on the way. 71 threads, six pages deep and rated 4.53.

 

[daciasdesire]

My thread has been submitted Goldfinger. Hope you like it.

Catchya

Dacia

 

[goldfinger]

Thanks Dacia. A good hot thread, just what I am looking for. A big thanks also to Kendhal who has submitted three more threads. I love the way you are taking the stories, always a little different to what I would have expected.

 

[goldfinger]

I've added a few more pages. 77 threads now and six pages deep. Who is going to make it 7 pages deep?

 

[kendahl6969]

My first visit

This is my first visit to this forum and appreciate the compliments and feedback. Please continue to do so as I plan on checking back regularly while posting. Just wondering, whenever I try to post threads of much more than a screenful, I lose the login and my work. Any suggestions? Still a newbie at the 'puter

 

[Guest]

Chyoo seems to time you out after 20 mins or so automatically. Simply log in again then use your "back" button to find your previous typing which you can then submit.

Thanks once more for the four new posts. Its great for me to log on and find contributions waiting.

Also a big thanks to Jakelyon for a first time contribution. Lucy's aunt is hot!

 

[kendahl6969]

Thanks for the help

Thanks for the suggestion, but as happened when I tried previously, I get a blank submission screen or page expired. I can sometimes sneak a longer story, but lost what I thought was a pretty good webcam thread. Try a cut and paste?

 

[goldfinger]

I usually write in word and then cut and paste in. I have just added eight new threads. 102 in total now and seven pages deep.

heres the link http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=c&story_id=866

 

[goldfinger]

New posts from Jakelyon and publicslut. Thanks for these, it is contributions like these that keep the story rolling and fresh.

116 threads and 8 pages deep. Lucy is getting to be quite a goer. She and her aunt often get hot and shes been had by quite a few guys.

I have enjoyed writing/editing this story more than any of my others as there is so much variety/ so many possibilites within the storyline. There is even a long spy story in there with no sex in it yet (8 pages starting from "Being nosy") but I am sure it will happen sometime.

 

[jakelyon]

great story

This is a great story line because of the endless ways the story can go. It is more interesting when the story line is not limited to certain characters, or plots. This one allows the writer and reader to wander all over the place.

 

[goldfinger]

Thanks Jake. I appreciate your contributions. They are well written and imaginative. Keep them cuming!

 

[publicslut]

I'm glad you liked my posts (there part of Lucy's webcam experience for those who haven't seen them).

I added a new thread where she puts on a french maid outfit. I'm torn between adding more branches and continuing them, what do guys reckon is best?