Jackie.Hikaru
See you space cowboy
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Same thing happened to meI immediately spotted three fucking typos I KNOW I sorted during editing
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Same thing happened to meI immediately spotted three fucking typos I KNOW I sorted during editing
New conspiracy theory dropped, Laurel secretly inserts a couple of fresh errors into every story when it gets published, to keep writers humble (or at least neurotic)Same thing happened to mewe’re all being gaslit by lit’s ui
I enjoyed the read... but was waiting for Tyler to turn up againNew story is up... and I immediately spotted three fucking typos I KNOW I sorted during editing. Ah, well.
3BR, 2BA, 1 Story - a divorced couple completes the final walkthrough of their house before putting it on the market.
Motherfucker! Man, that pissed me off; I have no idea where that slip-up came from.I enjoyed the read... but was waiting for Tyler to turn up again
New story is up... and I immediately spotted three fucking typos I KNOW I sorted during editing. Ah, well.
3BR, 2BA, 1 Story - a divorced couple completes the final walkthrough of their house before putting it on the market.
You were handling a lot in that story though. I liked the allusion of walking the rooms as also a walk through their lives. One comment... I would have put the hallway at the end instead of the start. The juxtaposition of them on the floor as newlyweds and then cutting to him closing the door would have been a coup de grace.Motherfucker! Man, that pissed me off; I have no idea where that slip-up came from.
Bold move, taking pregnancy completely off the table right away in an incest story! They love pregnancy in there!The first of a five-part story The Healer has published tonight. It's my 50th piece to be published. I started this one in November of 2022. It's been one of these where I would get excited to write on it but that excitement wouldn't last long for some reason. It's also my longest piece at just under 72K words, which is why I chose to break it up to publish.
The premise is that a brother grants his sister's dying wish to experience sex, and she doesn't want any random guy doing it, because she wants love involved, and given the options of her older brother or her dad, she chooses the brother. Miraculously, she quickly finds she has more energy and begins to gain weight, and scans reveal that her cancer is shrinking. She knows in her heart that her brother's semen has healing properties. He will have other opportunities to try to prove that his sister is correct.
Just finished chapter 1, good stuff. The first 2/3 of that are gut wrenching. Although I kept thinking “what if when they csme out of her bedroom the first time, he heard his mother crying in her room. He looks in and his father is cradling her and has a heartbroken look on his face.” The idea that they MIGHT know but chose not to confront it because it was her dying wish, now that’s a mind-fuck. What do they do when she lives? “It was okay for him to fuck me when I’m dying but not when I’m living?”The first of a five-part story The Healer has published tonight. It's my 50th piece to be published. I started this one in November of 2022. It's been one of these where I would get excited to write on it but that excitement wouldn't last long for some reason. It's also my longest piece at just under 72K words, which is why I chose to break it up to publish.