What are your thoughts on my story “Kelsi’s Adventures Ch 03”

[WW2Mike]

https://www.literotica.com/s/kelsis-adventures-ch-03

What was the basic plot summary between Jordan and Kelsi in the third chapter of Kelsi's Adventures? I want the whole recap and your thoughts about the entire chapter.

 

[SisterJezabel]

Is it marks out of 100? Do you have a rubric you want us to follow and how many references do you want? Will it go towards our final grade?

 

[WW2Mike]

Is it marks out of 100? Do you have a rubric you want us to follow and how many references do you want? Will it go towards our final grade?

I just want your thoughts about Chapter 3 and the entire recap.

 

[housewares]

I am very confused, why are you asking for a plot summary and recap from others of your own work? :/

 

[DarkPleasures]

I tried reading your chapter one and did not like it. I am not a fan of present tense, use of parentheses, or how you describe your characters. After reading:

The adventure begins with two people on their way to the beach via a purple sedan. One of them is Jordan, who is a 45-year-old man with long jet-black hair (tied in a ponytail) and a beard, and is the one behind the wheel as he drives to the beach. The other one is Kelsi, a 24 year old woman with long blonde hair, and she's sitting in the front passenger seat as she looks forward to a simple time at the beach away from home.

I hit the back button. I've never read your chapter too or three because of this. I kinda agree with the others who have posted here. Why do you want a "detailed book report" on your chapter?