Well I have taken the plunge now it seems..

[crystalhunting]

I have submitted some poetry to Lit.

Let me know what you think please.

Here it is.....http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=16418....




CH

 

[koalabear]

Hmmmmm I give it a 10. Wait it only went to 5 didn't it!.....hmmmm

 

[crystalhunting]

Thank you.





CH

 

[CelestialBody]

My taste runs more into

 

[crystalhunting]

Re: My taste runs more into

old fashioned sonnets, but I liked yours all the same. 5/5

Well CB...

I'm writing of current adventure in Love,and it is Glorious!!



CH

 

[KillerMuffin]

Why did I think you'd asked someone to marry you...?

 

[crystalhunting]

Why did I think you'd asked someone to marry you...?

I have been married before....I doubt I ever will again,perhaps I should have used different semantics so not to confuse Mrs.Muffie.

My apologies.



CH

 

[Paradyce]

I found both of the poems you submitted were fabulous!! Mind if I forward one of them to a friend??

Both of them kinda' give you the little shivers up your spine...

 

[crystalhunting]

Go ahead.




CH

 

[Demian]

I'm listening to a Remake of...

The House of the Rising Sun...Keep writing

 

[Shakespeare]

Re: My taste runs more into

old fashioned sonnets, but I liked yours all the same. 5/5

Sonnet 130
by William Shakespeare


My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun,
Coral is far more red, than her lips red,
If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun:
If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head:
I have seen roses damasked, red and white,
But no such roses see I in her cheeks,
And in some perfumes is there more delight,
Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks.
I love to hear her speak, yet well I know,
That music hath a far more pleasing sound:
I grant I never saw a goddess go,
My mistress when she walks treads on the ground.
_ And yet by heaven I think my love as rare,
_ As any she belied with false compare.

 

[nosferotu420]

poetry ch thats a new one for u