Was It Real Or Was It A Dream?

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Suzie Samuels sizzles!

If you like writing that brings the sense of sight and sound alive with scene description you'll like this story.

"…as another streak of lightening lit up the bathroom this one so much closer. Misty caught a glimpse of herself in the large mirror on the north wall it was almost photographic-like, snapped in that split second of luminosity."

http://literotica.com/storyxs/stories/wirowiad_r_817_i0.shtml
 
Hi High Peaks, I am so glad you enjoyed it and I hope others will too. This peice almost wrote itself, it was so much fun to do. The ending is certainly different.
 
Loved the story

Wow the end sent chills up and down my back!!! You are a very good writer!!!

ANiceGuy@literotica.com
 
Is it bad to have a sad ending?

Do all erotic stories have to have a happy ending?

Can erotica not reflect all of our human remotions or is there a formual that one must adhere to in order to be recognized as I top erotic writer?

I love writing erotica but not necessarily just a plain porn piece, I love my characters to come to life.

I hope you will continue to let me know what you think of my stories.
 
You already know what I think about this piece, and all your others. But I shall said it again. You have a gift for description and imagery. Keep up the good work.
 
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