Was I Faithful to My Characters?

[Mastered_again]

I posted part 10 of my Proclivities series.

For anyone who has followed it up to now, please take a read and tell me what you think. Believable or did I drive in to a ditch?

https://literotica.com/s/proclivities-pt-10

 

[Winter_Fare]

I guess so, but I didn't get the whole bit with the pervy brothers attacking. The series so far has been adventures, exploring together, very positive, that encounter came across as quite forced.

The argument over the phone seemed quite overwrought, but I guess that fits with the mother and daughter's long time frustrations coming to a head.

I enjoyed them sailing together, and there was some sensual stuff, but it's not my favourite installment. Don't get me wrong, I'm still looking forward to where it goes next x

 

[Mastered_again]

I guess so, but I didn't get the whole bit with the pervy brothers attacking. The series so far has been adventures, exploring together, very positive, that encounter came across as quite forced.

The argument over the phone seemed quite overwrought, but I guess that fits with the mother and daughter's long time frustrations coming to a head.

I enjoyed them sailing together, and there was some sensual stuff, but it's not my favourite installment. Don't get me wrong, I'm still looking forward to where it goes next x

Thanks for the honesty