Wanting to write a story

[123pickme3]

I don't know if this is the correct place to post this I want to write a story but, I have never done one before. I know what I want it to be about my question is how do I do it just write it and have someone check and see if it is ok to post? Any help here would be appreciated.

 

[123pickme3]

I guess I need to give a little more information about what I want to write about so I can see about a volunteer editor to help. The story is about a woman named Karen and she has some secert desires about anal and what she would love to see she plays with her ass daily and would love to see a male doing another males ass while a woman does the second mans ass. there is alot more to it but that is the general idea

 

[snooper]

I don't know if this is the correct place to post this I want to write a story but, I have never done one before. I know what I want it to be about my question is how do I do it just write it and have someone check and see if it is ok to post? Any help here would be appreciated.

I don't know if it will help, but here's how I do it:

Given the basic idea:

woman named Karen and she has some secert desires about anal and what she would love to see she plays with her ass daily and would love to see a male doing another males ass while a woman does the second mans ass.

Split it into sections:

woman named Karen

she has some secert desires about anal and what she would love to see

she plays with her ass daily

would love to see a male doing another males ass

a woman does the second mans ass.

Then take each section and expand the ideas in that section until you think that the outline of that bit is complete.

For example:

would love to see a male doing another males ass

needs to be expanded to show
- the descriptions of her dream men,
- how they got to be in this action, (did they know each other or is it a barroom pick-up?)
- how she got to see them (was it set up for her to watch or is she a Peeping Thomasina)
- what her reactions are
- do they know she is there, or do they catch her, or neither.

And so on.

Then you can move on to the actual writing of words which will be in the story itself, such as:

Karen lay back in the bath and let her mind wander to the young man she had seen in the mall. She was absolutely certain he was looking for an encounter of some kind, and it certainly wasn't with a woman. She could see the meeting now, the tentative glances, the first words ... what would they be? "Do you have a light?" No, the mall is no-smoking.

Do you get the gist?

 

[bluebell]

A random observation that is not about broccoli

"Gist" looks dirty in print.

 

[123pickme3]

story

Thank You Snooper I can tell this is going to be more difficult than I had expected, however, I am looking forward to the challange. You have given me alot of good advice I can work with Thank you

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Right On Target

Snooper is right on target with his advice, laying it out in a forthright and logical manner that I would have also, and have in the past, done.

Yet this is not the first time we've fielded these types of questions. There are many that come here with a desire to write and seek our help. I'm wondering if there should be a sticky addressing writing issues?

Oops, LadyC isn't QUITE out the door yet, maybe I better wait before stirring up more trouble <grin>