bubbatxman
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- Feb 28, 2012
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I don't know if anyone has done this on the site, but maybe we can "collaborate" on a story. I will write the "young man" parts and you can write the older female "cougar" parts. I write what he thinks and does, you write what "she" thinks and does.
This could probably go in Erotic Couplings, First Time, or some other category depnding on where the story goes.
I am your neighbor's son, I am about to graduate from high school, I'm 18 already because my birthday falls in October. I put out a flyer to do yard work for money, and you answered the email that was in it. I'm about the same price as the "service", so you answer my ad. (We will need to determine if you already know me, think you know me or if you have seen me, or we're strangers here.) You email to accept my offer, then I come by to talk about how you want your yard done, and the mowing schedule.
"Ding, dong", I ring the door bell. You open the door to a surprise. A strong, tall, muscled young man in blue basketball shorts and a Mavs t-shirt is standing before you. I say "hello ma'am", you answered my email for lawn service? I notice you, an older woman, but still beautiful. Your hair is (color), you're (tall, just right, short), your figure is (athletic, curvy, thin).
(Insert your impressions of me here.)
(breaking out of fantasy now)
If you're a writer, I think we could have fun with this and maybe even have a shot if they have a "Summer Nights" or "Summer Lovin'" contest. I would take the time and do it right, so that we have a shot, rather than just trying to get something our for Earth.
Does yard work qualify for Earth day? (Probably not, given that the young man would be using "power tools", although I could make the young man "work harder" with an old-fashioned push power and environmentally friendly electric edging).
This could probably go in Erotic Couplings, First Time, or some other category depnding on where the story goes.
I am your neighbor's son, I am about to graduate from high school, I'm 18 already because my birthday falls in October. I put out a flyer to do yard work for money, and you answered the email that was in it. I'm about the same price as the "service", so you answer my ad. (We will need to determine if you already know me, think you know me or if you have seen me, or we're strangers here.) You email to accept my offer, then I come by to talk about how you want your yard done, and the mowing schedule.
"Ding, dong", I ring the door bell. You open the door to a surprise. A strong, tall, muscled young man in blue basketball shorts and a Mavs t-shirt is standing before you. I say "hello ma'am", you answered my email for lawn service? I notice you, an older woman, but still beautiful. Your hair is (color), you're (tall, just right, short), your figure is (athletic, curvy, thin).
(Insert your impressions of me here.)
(breaking out of fantasy now)
If you're a writer, I think we could have fun with this and maybe even have a shot if they have a "Summer Nights" or "Summer Lovin'" contest. I would take the time and do it right, so that we have a shot, rather than just trying to get something our for Earth.
Does yard work qualify for Earth day? (Probably not, given that the young man would be using "power tools", although I could make the young man "work harder" with an old-fashioned push power and environmentally friendly electric edging).
