virgin, no longer!!

[hotti]

hi all!

i am no longer a literary virgin! (just a novice now *G*)

i would be tickled as hell if any of y'all would be kind enough to check out my first humble submission

here's the link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=24016

it's called "Hot Tub Love", and i've had a couple of positive emails (and a yummy photo *G*) as a result.

thanks, and take care!

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I have loved many, the more and the few -
I have loved many that I might love you.
- - - -Grace Fallow Norton

 

[abashed-dreamer]

story- hot tub

Hotti,

Nice writing, esp. as a first. Very hot indeed. You've got talent.

"abashed-dreamer'
lfmn2x@hotmail.com

 

[hotti]

Thank you, sweetie! i'm so tickled that people are reading and LIKING my story <hugging myself and grinning stupidly!>

*VBG* i think i'm officially addicted *G*

i am half done another, but this one needs a little work, because unlike the first, it's not a true story....but an adventure!



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It is only in adventure that some people succeed in knowing themselves--in finding themselves.
André Gide

 

[JRob]

Hottie

Nice job, eh!

Keep up the good work in the great white north. JR

 

[lilminx]

I just want to say that I enjoyed your story- it was pretty hot, and i thought it was well-written. Keep it up!

 

[hotti]

thanks jr and lilminx
i'm sure going to try... it's a rush *G*

i have about 5 ideas floating around in my mind right now.... the trick is to get them all typed the freak in!! lol....


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It is the spectator, and not life, that art really mirrors.
Oscar Wilde

Outside of a dog, a book is Man’s best friend. And inside of a dog, it’s too dark to read.
Groucho Marx

 

[ESQUIRED]

Story - erotic pleasure to read

Well written and great sex scene - goood build up, just enough tension. I need a hot tub!

 

[hotti]

<dirty grin>

i HIGHLY recommend it, honey


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The follies a man regrets most in his life are those which he didn't commit when he had the opportunity.
Helen Rowland


Why not seize the pleasure at once? How often is happiness destroyed by preparation, foolish preparation?
Jane Austen

 

[kidfella13]

come to my hot tub anytime

hey babe...just come on over for a dip in my tub

 

[hotti]

boyohboyohboy!!!

luke honey, if i could, you KNOW i'd be there, with or without our better halves!! *G*

though, WITH would be ideal <snicker>

 

[FireAngel]

I understand how you feel...

I just posted my first story too...the first story of any kind I have ever written. I definately understand how you feel.

I really liked your story a lot. I liked the build up with the dancing because as I always say dancing is sex with your clothes on!!!

Coincidentally my story took place in a hot tub as well...

Keep writing...I for one am looking forward to your next story!!

 

[hotti]

hey fireangel!

just read your story lots of good, fast-paced action there
it's just such a rush, isn't it? *BG*

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The human language is like a cracked kettle on which we beat out a tune for a dancing bear, when we hope with our music to move the stars.
- - - Gustave Flaubert, Madame Bovary

 

[kidfella13]

who's luke?

Hey hotti.....you must have me confused with someone else...but you can call me anything ya want...as long as you call me!!! *BG*

 

[tigerjen]

Fabulous!

Fabulous story!!
How long have you been writing erotica?
Keep up the awesome work, and do feel free
to check out my writings here on Literotica!

Tigerjen

 

[hotti]

thanks tigerjen!

i have been writing erotica for... oh.... about a week before that story was posted *G* it was my first attempt.
i'll be sure to check your library out also... i think i may already have read one of yours, i'll double check

 

[tigerjen]

i look forward.....

Hotti.......

Really? You were writing erotica for about a week, then
your story popped up on here......cool! I do look
forward to more writings by you! I also do look forward
to hearing back from you in regards to my writing.....!

Tigerjen

 

[LakotaMoon]

hot & tasty

*groans* Great!

And this guy... I would love to have a piece of him... ;-))

Girl, don't let us wait for the next part too long, ok??!!

 

[Guest]

*GRIN*

i guess i'm just the kind of person who goes for "it", you know? i had this story in my head forever, and one day i just sat down and wrote it out, longhand. spent a week twiddling with it, then decided, what the hell! i posted it. i used to write short stories when i was in grade school and high school (*groan* so long ago!), but then i just sorta... stopped. and it's something i really enjoyed, but now that i'm an adult, my interests have sidestepped a little *G*

lakota moon? thanks hon guess what? i actually married him! *G* spent years not wanting to share him lol... but now *those* interests have sidestepped a little too, lmao!



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"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
-Judy Garland

 

[hotti]

doh!

and of course, that unregistered above is me... posting but not realizing that my session had timed out

 

[PolarJuice]

Loved it ..... it that was what you can do in a week ... I'll be HARD pressed to wait for more .. I'm sure you'll Satisfy us with a quick return .. thanks for the story and hope to see you post more.. quickly

Polar ..

PS please ..check out my first ...
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=24672

 

[LakotaMoon]

You're on lucky girl!

;-)

long dark hair, blue eyes... *sighs and keeps on dreaming for a little while*

 

[LakotaMoon]

Oops - meant to say "one"...

 

[hotti]

yeah, i sure am, lol!

in more ways than one *G*

ain't life grand?


polar juice, i'm just opening your story now thanks for the link!

 

[LakotaMoon]

Wow - just figured out, that me, myself and I are no virgin anymore, too!

Yeeha! ;-)))))

By the way - what about that next part yet to come??

 

[hotti]

alright!!

lakota's not a virgin, lakota's not a virgin! <big grin>

the next part to that particular story will be a wee while... i started it, but another has taken over my imagination for the nonce......

i will get it done, promise