Vampire story idea

BlackSnake

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Vampire buys a private adult club.

He fires all the bouncers and waitresses replacing them with female vampires. The strippers are human as are the patrons.

The club is always packed as the waitresses wear nothing under their skirts and don't mind being touched.

There is no feeding on the patrons, blood come in refrigerated trucks bottled like wine.

They even have the cops under control.

The strippers are paid well, but all their tips must go to the house.

The story is about two human females (roommates) who become strippers in the club.

After enjoying the great pay from stripping one of the girls get greedy and decides to skim from her tips. She is caught and is turned. It is the other's roommates quest to survive....to stay human.
 
This one has potential!!!

You have some great story ideas buried in that head of yours!!

Can't wait to read this one if anyone takes it up :cathappy:
 
ferociouskittycat said:
This one has potential!!!

You have some great story ideas buried in that head of yours!!

Can't wait to read this one if anyone takes it up :cathappy:

I'm getting there. The beginning is being review right now.
 
I hope you get a big fat E beside this one!!

It's a fantastic story idea :)
 
Match Made In Heaven said:
I want to read this story!

who are the patrons? Vamps or humans? Do the humans know about the vamps?

Take it easy, its coming soon...
 
Hmmm.... I've been riding high all day with the story having a rating of five after 7 votes and then Wam! Down she went.
 
You left pubic comments off.

Mine was one of your first votes :D

Too bad you didn't edit the last paragraph you added. There are two noticeable mistakes in there, but hell... don't take away from the rest of the story.

How's chapter two coming along?
 
doormouse said:
You left pubic comments off.

Mine was one of your first votes :D

Too bad you didn't edit the last paragraph you added. There are two noticeable mistakes in there, but hell... don't take away from the rest of the story.

How's chapter two coming along?

I'm fired up on chapter 2 introducing a new character. I hope that you'll find it just as interesting.
 
I'd delete that post BlackSnake.

Some ass has been bombing the top stories. Two of mine have been hit. Mine dropped from #1 to #55.

They're out to get the top stories. Psychocatblah's story still hasn't recovered either.

She was #1 for ages.
 
doormouse said:
I'd delete that post BlackSnake.

Some ass has been bombing the top stories. Two of mine have been hit. Mine dropped from #1 to #55.

They're out to get the top stories. Psychocatblah's story still hasn't recovered either.

She was #1 for ages.

Got slammed from 4.90 to 4.58...LOL It's still a good story in my opinion. Those 10 seconds went fast.

Maybe you should be forced to register and send comments when you vote, else your vote won't be counted.
 
At least you didn't lose your Hot rating hon.

It IS a great story. Someone's out to get all the top stories.

They've been doing it for weeks.

Jealous wankers.
 
ferociouskittycat said:
Mmmm I know what I'd like to polish

:p

One can never too shinny, ya now ;)

Part II is up for approval. The last one didn't take as long as I thought.
 
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