Uncle Buys His Niece

[Barca300]

I had an idea in my head for a story where an Uncle, who's been admiring his young nieces body for some time, buys her from her parents, in exchange for paying off their debts from their extravagant lifestyle they'd created for their kids.

Suddenly, Tiffany, a wannabe musician and all around 'good girl' finds herself as a slave for her Uncle. The Uncle, for his part, begins to train her as his own personal sex slave, even as she finishes her senior year of high school.

Thoughts? Ideas? Anyone who'd like to write this.

 

[sirhugs]

does it end with her in love with him?

 

[Englandboy2]

Maybe a family has two daughters, maybe twins, one of whom is a very good violinist, except her parents can’t afford to send her to a top school. The uncle offers to pay her way, but demands the other daughter in return. She is lazy and insolent and has few prospects. Basically, the parents are glad to see the back of her. The uncle gets a sex slave, the other daughter gets to fulfil her dreams at a top music academy, and the parents are rid of an unruly daughter. Everyone wins - except the sex slave daughter, of course, but maybe she finds a sort of happiness too, serving her uncle and his pervert friends.

 

[Barca300]

does it end with her in love with him?

I dunno. I kinda thought her falling in love with him would be a little cliche. Thought I"d mix it up a bit with having this spirited, smart good girl just accept her life as a slave girl. Still though, I'm not a writer.

It would be interesting to see what events turned this good girl into a good slave.

 

[Lost_Yonder]

There would have to be some catch for the parents to actually "sell" their daughter - even to pay off their debts, it doesn't seem like a very likely prospect. However, perhaps the uncle became very wealthy with his investments, but is also very stingy, unsharing with his family. He leads a lavish lifestyle, but also developed a taste for finer things. Being deeply in debt, knowing they can offer few opportunities for their daughter they send them to him - he agrees to payoff their debts. It is not seen as selling their daughter, rather giving her real opportunities in life by allowing the uncle to care for her.

Only they don't know his deviant ways and demands that he will place on her, forcing her into silence about his sexual abuse with the threat that he will ruin her parents...

 

[Atavist]

Why doesn't she just get a job?

 

[Englandboy2]

Why doesn't she just get a job?

Because that would only happen in the real world. This is Lit World and that's the way things are here.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Why doesn't she just get a job?

She lives in America where jobs that can support a single person are few and far between.

 

[Atavist]

She could go to college and get a dorm and a job to supplement her monetary needs.

It would be better to just begin in media res and not worry about whatever reason you have for parents selling their daughter to her uncle for sexual slavery, as it's probably already been done and doesn't seem consequential to the plot, which is more about a teenage girl being enslaved by her uncle.

Frankly considering the situation she's put in, it would be far more terrifying for her if she didn't know why it was happening at all, just that her parents turned her over to this guy to rape or abuse as he saw fit.

 

[Sean Renaud]

She could go to college and get a dorm and a job to supplement her monetary needs.

It would be better to just begin in media res and not worry about whatever reason you have for parents selling their daughter to her uncle for sexual slavery, as it's probably already been done and doesn't seem consequential to the plot, which is more about a teenage girl being enslaved by her uncle.

Frankly considering the situation she's put in, it would be far more terrifying for her if she didn't know why it was happening at all, just that her parents turned her over to this guy to rape or abuse as he saw fit.

Going to college requires money. Nobody who's having money problems is in a position to go to a college that has dorms. This is America. Maybe in some European country you could pull that but aside from a scholarship going to college with a job to supplement her needs not really an option.

I agree however that not explaining it might be better. Thought it would make the parents, should they ever enter the story, much less sympathetic.

 

[Beatnic_jazzman]

What if...

The uncle bought their debt, that way he has permanent leverage.

 

[Atavist]

You're arguing that someone can't get into college and make a living on their own in America, but could be sold into slavery with no questions asked.

All she'd need to do was tell the police. She could sue for all manner of reasons or just wait to inherit what was hers.

 

[Sean Renaud]

You're arguing that someone can't get into college and make a living on their own in America, but could be sold into slavery with no questions asked.

All she'd need to do was tell the police. She could sue for all manner of reasons or just wait to inherit what was hers.

You'd change the terms of it of course but sure. Considering that there are infact strung out prostitutes all across America (and just last year they found a girl who'd been kidnapped like fifteen years ago living with her captor and her two daughters and she'd been shown off as his daughter and he was a known sexual predator) yes it's possible.

Also inherit what? Most Americans don't inherit anything worth any money cept maybe a car or a house if their lucky.

 

[Atavist]

From what he's said the girls parents had a lavish lifestyle, though were in debt. So presumably they had some things (in addition to debts) to pass on to their children upon being arrested or dying. Also the uncle could apparently get them out of it in exchange for their daughter, and can afford to pay for another mouth to feed and buy sexual slavery devices for, so he has money as well.

And I think you'll find more incidents of people putting themselves through hard work to get out of a bad situation than being sold into slavery.

edited to keep at least on topic

 

[Sean Renaud]

Fair enough. I'd long since stopped talking about the OP's specific scenario and more the scenario in general but still.

Depends on how far the parents fell how fast I suppose. I suspect there are lots of people who live (what we'd call) lavish life styles that could easily go bankrupt. It's not like rappers, lottery winners and athletes don't die poor all the time and depending on how it happened perhaps the daughter had no marketable skills.

It's still ultimately probably best to start off with her already enslaved for whatever reason by whatever means. Maybe she thinks she's better off with him than on the streets or maybe he lives sufficiently far out from society that she simply doesn't feel safe trying to escape.

 

[Atavist]

With her not knowing you can have the added suspense of her first escape, when she finally makes it back to her parents who take her to her bedroom (which is redecorated, for guests) while they call the police, only to find her uncle arriving with his parents looking on in annoyed dismay at the trouble she's caused them.

 

[Sean Renaud]

That's actually quite brilliant. Then you can play off how crushed she is that her parents would do this to her and develope them a bit as well. Was this soul crushing for them as well or were they the workaholic always on the road parents who honestly were no more devastated by selling (possibly one of multiple children) than they were when they fired the nanny who'd worked there for the past sixteen years.

 

[Englandboy2]

Being 18, the girl needs a reason not to run away the minute she discovers her uncle is a pervert. Even with the above scenario, where she runs back to her parents and they call her uncle rather than the police (which is very good, by the way) she would need an incentive not to run away again and again, maybe going straight to the police this time.

Maybe my earlier scenario of her having a talented sister would work. That way, there's a feeling of sacrifice - the girl is doing it for the benefit of her sister, who otherwise would not be able to fulfil her dream of attending a top music academy. Or maybe the uncle is paying for her father's health care or something, so the girl feels obliged to put up with her uncle's perverted ways to ease her father's suffering. Of course, the uncle is evil, otherwise he would simply pay out of the goodness of his heart, but if he wasn't a pervert there wouldn't be a story.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

what about this one: make it like a fairy tale. I mean, in fairy tales, many strange things happen.

I mean for example, the german "Hansel and Gretel" (I hope you know that).

Father and stepmother are poor. They can't feed Hansel and Gretel. So, you would expect that they tell them to get a job? No, instead, they abandon them in a forest.
After some wandering around, they find a house made of gingerbread. What sane person would build a house out of gingerbread? Just think, how it would look after some rain. And what about the animals, wouldn't they eat from the house?

So, maybe the uncle is some kind of wizard. He needs a servant for some things that he can't do with magic. (yeah, I admit, I stole that from another german book, "The robber Hotzenplotz"). He tells the parents, he would hire the nice so she could work for him. Of course, she has to live in his castle, but she can leave whenever she wants to. But that is a trick, she can't leave because of a magic spell (or a magic fence to be exact).

At first, the nice has to do normal housework, like cooking or cleaning. In the meantime, she walks around in the house and discovers a hidden basement. In the basement, there is an enchanted fairy. This fairy tells her: there is a way how she can get over the magic fence and leave the castle ... her stomach has to be full of cum. And her pussy and butthole, too. So to get away, she has to have sex with her uncle, the only other person in the entire castle.
Since she is good looking with a hot body, uncle already had second thoughts about her, so it was no real problem for her, to seduce him.

 

[Barca300]

With her not knowing you can have the added suspense of her first escape, when she finally makes it back to her parents who take her to her bedroom (which is redecorated, for guests) while they call the police, only to find her uncle arriving with his parents looking on in annoyed dismay at the trouble she's caused them.

Ooooh, I really like this. Exploring the dynamic between her and her parents would be really interesting, and I'd love to see what crushing events lead to her acceptance of her life as a slave.

I imagine there would be points in her new life where her resolve is weakened, and learning that her parents are in fact encouraging her sexual slavery would be huge. Any other ideas?

Also, is anyone interested in writing? P.M!

 

[lovecraft68]

First off this whole "even while she's a senior in high school" thing has to be forgotten. It flirts to close to underage.

I have ways around it and can pull it off, but many haven't and it can get kicked out.

As for the story itself good to see yet another reluctance non consent variation going on. Very original for this forum.

I think if there were more variety here-as in not every single idea being a gang bang or non con scenario-this forum would get a lot more traffic and posters.

 

[Monazwx]

Maybe a family has two daughters, maybe twins, one of whom is a very good violinist, except her parents can’t afford to send her to a top school. The uncle offers to pay her way, but demands the other daughter in return. She is lazy and insolent and has few prospects. Basically, the parents are glad to see the back of her.

I find this intriguing and think that this could work.

There would have to be some catch for the parents to actually "sell" their daughter - even to pay off their debts, it doesn't seem like a very likely prospect.

You would be surprised. Unfortunately, there are quite a few cases where money has bought things that it shouldn't.

only to find her uncle arriving with his parents looking on in annoyed dismay at the trouble she's caused them.

I see this escalating the plot quite a bit, esp. if this is when she realizes that the parents sold over off for money, (also creating a deeper rift between her and her sister).

 

[Monazwx]

cont'd

And I think you'll find more incidents of people putting themselves through hard work to get out of a bad situation than being sold into slavery.

Maybe, but what if, instead of being talented like her sister, she has a learning disorder, (i.e. causing the bad grades), and can only find low-grade, minimum wage work. Coming from a lavish-lifestyle, she can't (or won't) adjust to the downgrade in lifestyle and decides that its better to stay with the uncle, (at least for the time being anyways).

First off this whole "even while she's a senior in high school" thing has to be forgotten. It flirts to close to underage.

Actually, I disagree. I think it works because she's borderline jailbait. She may have been 'held back' in school, thus making the 18+ work for this story.

 

[Sean Renaud]

On literotica High School seniors are eighteen unless specifically stated otherwise.

 

[A4mushroom]

How about the Uncle loved the body of his niece so much that her began to 'rent' her. The parents accept because they can use the extra cash and they vaguely know whats going on but choose to keep quiet about it. The niece just thinks she is being sent to visit her uncle a lot but he becomes very forward with her on her visits and they end up having sex every time she comes over.

Or...

The uncle and niece have sex for what ever reason (drunken family party, comforting etc...) and the uncle enjoys it so much that he wants to pay her parents to have her visit to him every weekend (essentially renting her) and they end up fucking on every visit.

Just a couple ideas for this type of story.