xPhantomKissX
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- Aug 10, 2005
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I finally got around to adding to my first lit story from a few years back.
http://www.literotica.com/s/a-very-special-delivery
My goal with the story was to take an extremely impossible fetish event and make it believable.
I think I was pretty successful with it but wondering where to go next.
I've started part 4 with Elizabeth returning to the Spa mistress for and introductory day in shibari bondage.
While I want to eventually return to her cum fetish, I was thinking of introducing two milk maidens into the spa event to make it a lactation piece -- as a temporary replacement for the cum.
I worry that it takes too hard of a turn off the original story line.
And feedback would help a ton.
http://www.literotica.com/s/a-very-special-delivery
My goal with the story was to take an extremely impossible fetish event and make it believable.
I think I was pretty successful with it but wondering where to go next.
I've started part 4 with Elizabeth returning to the Spa mistress for and introductory day in shibari bondage.
While I want to eventually return to her cum fetish, I was thinking of introducing two milk maidens into the spa event to make it a lactation piece -- as a temporary replacement for the cum.
I worry that it takes too hard of a turn off the original story line.
And feedback would help a ton.
