Chocolatemint
Virgin
- Joined
- Jan 31, 2003
- Posts
- 2
Greetings!
I'm a longtime reader and new writer here; my second story was just accepted this morning. I'd love to get feedback on both of them from other readers and writers alike. They're both (loosely) based on true stories--hence the first and second person--and in the Erotic Couplings category, under the name Chocolatemint. I promise, neither of them is as stiffly written as this post (well . . . except for certain parts of the male anatomy).
A Quick Taste - A brief, teasing taste while his roommate is out.
Chocolate or Mint? - Our first experiment with flavored condoms (yes, this is where I got the pen name).
Chocomi*
I'm a longtime reader and new writer here; my second story was just accepted this morning. I'd love to get feedback on both of them from other readers and writers alike. They're both (loosely) based on true stories--hence the first and second person--and in the Erotic Couplings category, under the name Chocolatemint. I promise, neither of them is as stiffly written as this post (well . . . except for certain parts of the male anatomy).
A Quick Taste - A brief, teasing taste while his roommate is out.
Chocolate or Mint? - Our first experiment with flavored condoms (yes, this is where I got the pen name).
Chocomi*