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An ex boy/girfriend tracks down a their former lover down and abuse him/her and the spause
 
Why?

Actually, two whys: why does the character want to do this, and why should the reader be interested? Both parties need to have motivation.
 
An ex boy/girfriend tracks down a their former lover down and abuse him/her and the spause

Ted was Jilted at the altar by Billie. Ted was a little unstable and when his childhood sweetheart ran off with his best man Rufus, he went full on pyscho.

When he heard they got married, he hunted them down, kidnapped them and...
 
A little too real?

An ex boy/girfriend tracks down a their former lover down and abuse him/her and the spause

Spause? They got married in Bavaria?
I kid...

Great premise. There's a reason that person is an "ex."
Went out with them because they were "hot," a couple of dates/morning-afters into it, they realize that hot girl/guy is certifiable. So long.

Could be a mix of terrifying and erotic, or just plain terrifying.
 
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