The proposition

[Nightscream89]

18 y.o. Daughter of a former millionair. Her father had a lot of money, not quite on billionaire level, but wealthy enough to hang around with them. unfortunately her father made mistakes, big mistakes. He couldn't handle the amount of money he had, trusted the wrong people and one day everything came crashing down. He was charged with fraud and somehow avoided jailtime but lost everything. Now they live in a small rental home, scraping by with a huge debt still hanging over their heads. The daughter's college dreams came crumbling down with her father's wrongdoings. She dreamed of a top college but that seems very far out of reach at the moment..

Until she is approached by a friend/former business partner of her father, an exclusive club has one night a year where one of them arranges a woman. Not a regular prostitute of course, she has to be special in some way. In the past upcoming singers/actresses been brought there and one time, a couple of years ago, one of them purchased a girls virginity for the party, there was a craze on purchasing virginities at that time. This year the friend/fomer business partner of her father has the task to arrange the girl. So he approached her, the men all did business with her father and have seen her before on some occasions, so the daughter of a former business partner is of course special...

She of course rejects him and wants to walk out, shouting that she's not a prostitute. Then however, he mentions the payment, he will pay for a college of her choice, including living costs, rent and even 1k pocket money for each month she's in college. She freezes in her tracks and eventually accepts, 1 night to secure her future... The question is, how will the men use her that night?

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Exact age is not needed. 'Sometime after high school ... ' is close enough.

 

[Nightscream89]

Exact age is not needed. 'Sometime after high school ... ' is close enough.

Purely added that because I think some people are still underage when they graduate, so I wanted to clarify it just in case. But the age indeed isn't important besides her being 18+.

 

[dirk2024]

The question is, how will the men use her that night?

How many men are we talking about? 5, 10, 20?

The way I see it, this could go one of two ways:

1. Gangbang. Although that's almost too easy.

2. She is rotated from room to room. Each room has a different man and he has created the theme for that room. Then, its up to your imagination.

2a. A mountain cabin room, complete with fireplace and bearskin rug
2b. An Arabian nights room, lots of incense, candles, pillows and gauzy curtains.
2c. A Sapphic room, one of the business associates is a woman. Or perhaps a man who brings in one or more women with him to enjoy our young debutante.
2d. The Dungeon. You know how this plays out.
2e. The gynocologist office. Stirrups anyone?
2f. The college professor's office. Gee, Ms. Young Thing. You're failing my class. What will you do for an A?
2g. The Interrogation. Okay Ms Thief. We have you on camera stealing our products. Stand for a strip search!

I think you know which option I hope you take.

 

[Nightscream89]

How many men are we talking about? 5, 10, 20?

The way I see it, this could go one of two ways:

1. Gangbang. Although that's almost too easy.

2. She is rotated from room to room. Each room has a different man and he has created the theme for that room. Then, its up to your imagination.

2a. A mountain cabin room, complete with fireplace and bearskin rug
2b. An Arabian nights room, lots of incense, candles, pillows and gauzy curtains.
2c. A Sapphic room, one of the business associates is a woman. Or perhaps a man who brings in one or more women with him to enjoy our young debutante.
2d. The Dungeon. You know how this plays out.
2e. The gynocologist office. Stirrups anyone?
2f. The college professor's office. Gee, Ms. Young Thing. You're failing my class. What will you do for an A?
2g. The Interrogation. Okay Ms Thief. We have you on camera stealing our products. Stand for a strip search!

I think you know which option I hope you take.

Hmm, I don't really like the idea of different rooms, that is a bit too split up for me. Now I am thinking of having different phases. Maybe four 2 hour sessions, with an hour rest in between them, that would make sence if they don't want to break her, they just want an unique experience.

Thinking of having the first 2 hours be a dinner, where she is the dinner plate, wearing a mask so the surprise of her identity is still a mystery, that reveal will happen at the start of the second 2 hours. The mask blocks her vision as well. Hearing the men talk, some voices familiar as she met them as her father's business associates. She feels them taking food off her body, some can't help themselves and give her breast a quick squeeze or brush against her pussy.

The second 2 hours could be in a different room, maybe more a lounge setting where the fun starts, the final room could be a dungeon where the high class manners truly go out the window...

 

[PennyThompson]

The timeline you're describing makes it seem like dad's business partners have been lusting after her since well before she turned 18, which is probably not going to fly, in addition to being creepy

 

[LoneMilf]

The timeline you're describing makes it seem like dad's business partners have been lusting after her since well before she turned 18, which is probably not going to fly, in addition to being creepy

Seconded. Something felt off about the idea, but I couldn't quite put my finger on what it was. Definitely this.

 

[Nightscream89]

The timeline you're describing makes it seem like dad's business partners have been lusting after her since well before she turned 18, which is probably not going to fly, in addition to being creepy

I wouldn't say they were lusting over her, basically they know who she is, since she is his daughter. And now she is a beautiful young woman. Seeing the predicament she is in and wanting to go to her dream college but it's been ripped away. The friend/business partner heard about it as he needed to provide a woman for the special night, he looked at her and decided that this could be the answer he was looking for, and it was. It's not like all these men were waiting for an opportunity to fuck her, however seeing what a gorgeous young woman she is now and as opportunity presents itself they are of course happy to indulge.

Also like I mentioned before, her age isn't set in stone, it's not like she HAS to be 18, but she obviously needs to be 18+ and young enough to still start a top notch college. So I went for 18 for those reasons, but 19 or 20 would probably still work.

 

[KindredFlame]

The timeline you're describing makes it seem like dad's business partners have been lusting after her since well before she turned 18, which is probably not going to fly, in addition to being creepy

They wouldn’t do that would they. No girls look like girls right up to their 18th birthday then they change into sex symbols. We all know this. Don’t we?

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

That's about the least thing 'off' about this.

 

[PennyThompson]

They wouldn’t do that would they. No girls look like girls right up to their 18th birthday then they change into sex symbols. We all know this. Don’t we?

The site rules are the site rules
Obviously the predatory aspect of the plot is intentional, it's not for me but whatevs!

 

[KindredFlame]

The site rules are the site rules
Obviously the predatory aspect of the plot is intentional, it's not for me but whatevs!

Yes sorry I was having a bit of fun with it. I do agree with the rules totally but sometimes it’s like s switch turns to hottie on a girls 18th.

 

[Nightscream89]

The site rules are the site rules
Obviously the predatory aspect of the plot is intentional, it's not for me but whatevs!

define predatory?
Because if it's about the 'lusting after her before she's 18' it's not, as I explained in my previous response.

I feel like people are misunderstanding how well she knows these men. She has seen them a few times before through her father. She doesn't really know them at all. The point that makes her special is that she's the daughter of a former associate of theirs, they drove hard bargains with him and now, after his fall, they get to have sex with his daughter, even though the father doesn't know about it, I would say it's a power thing. Again it's not like they have been waiting for her or anything like that.

If it's predatory as they take advantage of her predicament to get her to participate this night, then yes, that's intentionally.

 

[PennyThompson]

define predatory?

Someone in a position of relative power manipulating and sexually exploiting a vulnerable person.

Which is a kink, I get that! But it will ick some people out, possibly to the point where a story like this belongs in the non-consent/reluctance story category.

 

[KittyOfSteele]

The idea on its own it's actually within the parameters of dark romances I've seen flying around from the most teen angst charged erotica seen on Wattpad, to best sellers in Amazon. We might be on the same wavelength you and I since this is the type of transgressive and right of the edge type of tale I like to write about. Not sure if it's the noir writer in me talking, but anyway, I digress.

You might not need to mention her age though. If she is of university age and worried about not being able to enter a school due to money issues, anyone will understand she is at most at the earliest of her 20s, and at least 18. Mentioning her age might be, at best, arbitrary, and at worse, might make it look like the other men have been lusting for her since before she was 18 years old, which is a big no no in Literotica as stated in the guidelines. Again, it's your decision, and this is your execution of this idea. Your writing is valid. Write whatever you want.

The question I have would be though: does it have to be one night? I mean, what if she gets only one client, feels regret, waits a while, and then needs the money, and decides to come back? What if it is a slow descent into Break the Cutie territory? Just my two cents though: not everything has to happen in a single night.

 

[Nightscream89]

Someone in a position of relative power manipulating and sexually exploiting a vulnerable person.

Which is a kink, I get that! But it will ick some people out, possibly to the point where a story like this belongs in the non-consent/reluctance story category.

I can see that, I am doubting to change it a bit to that she might have heard rumors about the elite group excisting, but no one knows if it's true or just an urban legend. The rumors say the women that attend the yearly night get a ridiculous amount of money for it. So she approaches the one man she has seen at her home a couple of times and who was always nice to her. She wants to do this to be able to go to college, if it's real at least. The man denies it at first and tells her to stop talking about an urban myth. She however pleads that this is her only chance to go to a good college and secure her future. Eventually he invites her to his office, where she first has to sign an NDA and then he offers her a full college ride for the one night.

Having her take the initiative might change the dynamics a bit? But I don't know if this is too forced into the story.

In addition I am thinking of having around 6 wealthy people at the get together, one the person who brought her in. I am thinking of having one of the 6 be a wealthy woman, who loves to play with gorgeous young women as well (She won't touch the men in that case though.) And one being a younger man, early 30's who is quite new to the group and made a name for himself being one of the youngest billionaire's.

 

[KindredFlame]

Boring me now. It’s the same thing over and over again. It goes on in real life but within the world of Literotica it is not to be expressed or implied. That’s it.