Topless Jen Chapter 2

[ShirtlessMike05]

Hi its Michael, for the second chapter in the Topless Jen series I have an idea for a story where Jen goes to an amusement park with Crystal. She starts out planning to wear a bikini top there but Crystal knowing how much she loves going topless hides the bikini from her so when she gets there she has to spend the whole day topless. They go on rides and meet other girls who join in on Jen's topless fun too. Let me know what you think.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

I also had another idea for the story. Jen wears her bikini top to the park but loses it somehow like on a roller coaster and has to spend the whole day there topless.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

Basically im just trying to keep from telling the same story over and over again. I want Jen to be topless as much as possible and have it be a main focus ofn the story but not to the extent where the reader feels like im bringing up the fact shes topless every few sentences.

 

[Totzman]

I like nudity stories like these but I've found it's difficult to come up with interesting things to happen once the clothes come off. Does she run into her conservative parents? Maybe an ex boyfriend? Things should happen, otherwise your story will get boring if it's all "she's topless, she's topless" yet you do want to frequently remind the reader of that to keep the erotic feel going.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

I like nudity stories like these but I've found it's difficult to come up with interesting things to happen once the clothes come off. Does she run into her conservative parents? Maybe an ex boyfriend? Things should happen, otherwise your story will get boring if it's all "she's topless, she's topless" yet you do want to frequently remind the reader of that to keep the erotic feel going.

Actually Jen does get naked for a short time in the later part of this chapter of the story its quite interesting actually. Most of the time she is topless though. I do agree with you though it is hard to come up with things to do once the clothes come off but I think thats the challenge. I mean if other writers can find things for their girls to do while already naked surely I can find things for Jen to do when she is topless.

Yes I do want Jen to run into her conservative parents at some point. Im not sure if I want it to happen in this part of the story or not. As for an ex boyfriend I was thinking of writing something about that into the story soon I just need to figure out how to make it work so it fits with the story.

Most of the time with these stories I like her to run into people she knows and or has met before in previous stories and usually I like something either embarassing or erotic to happen to them to keep the story interesting.

While I dont want to remind the reader all the time that she is topless I do want to do it often enough in a way to keep the erotic feeling going.