To all my noncon and mind control lovers.

[DarkCosmos]

The first Chapter of my new series "The Dotted Line" was just posted.

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-dotted-line-ch-01

This'll be my first foray into genuine noncon. For those who are avid noncon and mind control readers, I'd love to know what you think. I did my best to make this story something that readers who like it heavy and readers who like it light can both enjoy.

The story takes place in a cyberpunk dystopian future. While the main theme is Mind Control, other themes include, Sissification, Crossdressing, Non-consent, and a Domineering Master. I try to make all my stories intriguing yet palatable, so you won't find any heavy trigger warnings beyond the obvious.

With all that said, I'd love your feedback!

 

[SeraphNocturne]

Sounds promising. I’ll check it out and share my thoughts.

 

[joy_of_cooking]

Looking forward to it!

(If you see I've added it as favorite, that's just how I get stories into the Lit app.)

 

[Mastered_again]

One of my favorites and a subject I've written about. Will bookmark it now and give it a read. Comment to follow.

 

[joy_of_cooking]

Left a comment.

I skimmed through your other series too. I loved the song you made up.

 

[DarkCosmos]

Left a comment.

I skimmed through your other series too. I loved the song you made up.

Thank you!

 

[AlinaX]

You switch tenses near the beginning, and the opening scene leaves me depressed rather than curious.

 

[Mastered_again]

One of my favorites and a subject I've written about. Will bookmark it now and give it a read. Comment to follow.

Sorry, I couldn't get past page two. It felt like a nonstop rant against the dystopian world you created