Folks
I've been visiting this site for over decade now (though never posted much here), only interested in mom-son stories. Without much further ado, I want to put forward few suggestions for authors to consider when creating their literary erotica fiction (only mom-son):
Stories are best when narrated in 3rd person perspective as it provides opportunities to view the situation from both characters' perspectives, know their inner feelings & emotions.
I've read countless stories where author's entire focus is only in describing the sex act, in such mechanical way it feels like reading an instruction manual of an IKEA product. And then they just go on from one sex act to another non-stop like there's nothing else important in life. Don't do that. Instead focus on highlighting the incest aspect of it. Build and show emotions, eroticism, how vulnerable the characters are feeling, highlight the inner conflicts, the push & pull of society pressure and the lust of breaking the taboo boundaries. Indulge the readers in an immersive reading experience where the characters appear just another normal mom-son family and yet they're also struggling to keep a darker/erotic side of their lives. Show to readers, how that mother-son couple are balancing the two sides of their lives and how the taboo nature of their coupling overlaps, contradicts or hinders their normal live.
And what is this infatuation with butt reaming the mom? Why is this some kind of must have? One moment, mother & son have taken such a giant leap of breaking the ultimate taboo and instead of focusing on the social/psychological ramifications, the very next moment son is butt reaming his mother! There's absolutely nothing, NOTHING sexual or erotic about anal sex as it relates to incest erotica between mother & her son.
And please please please, for fuck sake, do not demean mothers in your stories - moms proudly calling themselves sluts, whores for their sons. Or sons declaring mothers as their personal sluts or bitches ...Seriously?? Even in the realms of fantasies and fiction, what self-respecting woman would allow to be belittled like this, and that too, of all the people in the world by their own sons? This is such a huge turn OFF instantly. Keep a sense of reality in your story writing unless your story is about flying pigs.
Also crucially important - when the sex scenes between mothers & sons start, I think most of you authors just can't control themselves from the visuals running in their mind and they tend to write in the same flow by continuously keep referring to characters as he she, his, her, paragraphs after paragraphs, pages after pages. Who the fuck is she or he? Are you writing an mother-son incest erotica or just another bland generic adult fiction? Remember, incest fiction is more about continuously highlighting the familial bonding between the characters, more so when it comes to intimacy and sex. Remind the readers about this by more direct references such as his mother, my mom, my son, her son etc.
Lastly but not least, what's with son switching to first name basis with his mom? This is yet another big turn off - it just instantly destroys the very fabric of an incest fueled mother-son relationship and becomes yet another generic boring adult fiction. Instead show that even though mother & son are intimate, they will always be mother & son first. Gravitate the son more towards his mother for further nurturing and psychological & emotional development in life. Show us how the mother's mothering instincts & feelings towards her son still trumps all other connections between them. That's what make incest erotica stand out from any other type of erotic fiction.
I've been visiting this site for over decade now (though never posted much here), only interested in mom-son stories. Without much further ado, I want to put forward few suggestions for authors to consider when creating their literary erotica fiction (only mom-son):
Stories are best when narrated in 3rd person perspective as it provides opportunities to view the situation from both characters' perspectives, know their inner feelings & emotions.
I've read countless stories where author's entire focus is only in describing the sex act, in such mechanical way it feels like reading an instruction manual of an IKEA product. And then they just go on from one sex act to another non-stop like there's nothing else important in life. Don't do that. Instead focus on highlighting the incest aspect of it. Build and show emotions, eroticism, how vulnerable the characters are feeling, highlight the inner conflicts, the push & pull of society pressure and the lust of breaking the taboo boundaries. Indulge the readers in an immersive reading experience where the characters appear just another normal mom-son family and yet they're also struggling to keep a darker/erotic side of their lives. Show to readers, how that mother-son couple are balancing the two sides of their lives and how the taboo nature of their coupling overlaps, contradicts or hinders their normal live.
And what is this infatuation with butt reaming the mom? Why is this some kind of must have? One moment, mother & son have taken such a giant leap of breaking the ultimate taboo and instead of focusing on the social/psychological ramifications, the very next moment son is butt reaming his mother! There's absolutely nothing, NOTHING sexual or erotic about anal sex as it relates to incest erotica between mother & her son.
And please please please, for fuck sake, do not demean mothers in your stories - moms proudly calling themselves sluts, whores for their sons. Or sons declaring mothers as their personal sluts or bitches ...Seriously?? Even in the realms of fantasies and fiction, what self-respecting woman would allow to be belittled like this, and that too, of all the people in the world by their own sons? This is such a huge turn OFF instantly. Keep a sense of reality in your story writing unless your story is about flying pigs.
Also crucially important - when the sex scenes between mothers & sons start, I think most of you authors just can't control themselves from the visuals running in their mind and they tend to write in the same flow by continuously keep referring to characters as he she, his, her, paragraphs after paragraphs, pages after pages. Who the fuck is she or he? Are you writing an mother-son incest erotica or just another bland generic adult fiction? Remember, incest fiction is more about continuously highlighting the familial bonding between the characters, more so when it comes to intimacy and sex. Remind the readers about this by more direct references such as his mother, my mom, my son, her son etc.
Lastly but not least, what's with son switching to first name basis with his mom? This is yet another big turn off - it just instantly destroys the very fabric of an incest fueled mother-son relationship and becomes yet another generic boring adult fiction. Instead show that even though mother & son are intimate, they will always be mother & son first. Gravitate the son more towards his mother for further nurturing and psychological & emotional development in life. Show us how the mother's mothering instincts & feelings towards her son still trumps all other connections between them. That's what make incest erotica stand out from any other type of erotic fiction.
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