Throb

You guys would not believe the email via feedback that just arrived in my inbox.

Among other things, offered to help my wife cuckold me. :rolleyes:

Yeah Right asshole.

MJL
 
THROBBS said:
hmm...
A bit better, but Looks like I will have to start over.
I need to lift a woman... To see how I balance.
Or watch someone else do it, but that's not quite as fun, even as a voyeur.

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Well - unless the gentleman is very strong - lifting her by the arm is going to be difficult - and regardless of his strength, unless he cups her elbows with his hands, that grip is going to be quite uncomfortable for her.

Would definitely suggest a wider stance for the gentleman if you are going to redraw.
 
mjl2010 said:
You guys would not believe the email via feedback that just arrived in my inbox.

Among other things, offered to help my wife cuckold me. :rolleyes:

Yeah Right asshole.

MJL
MJ - with the amount of stories you've written you're telling me you've never gotten fan-mail from someone who doesn't understand the concept of "fiction"?
 
babygrrl_702 said:
MJ - with the amount of stories you've written you're telling me you've never gotten fan-mail from someone who doesn't understand the concept of "fiction"?

It was in no way fan mail. It was blatant advertisement for a new yahoo group he's forming. Sorry I forgot to mention that. It was addressed to me though.

I've gotten plenty of fan-mail. Everything from people begging for the next chapter of Honeymoon cabin to the guy that wanted me to write more about white panties. White panties, one short sentence in Wife Christina and he's blowing his wad in his pants. People telling me what to include in the next chapter, everything.

The woman that wants to meet me because she thinks I'm John in honeymoon cabin and she wants his big dick. Even offered to lick my cum from Christina's pussy. Yep.

Oh yeah, lets not leave out the guy who wants to sit on my deck at night and watch the neighbors fuck. (Silhouettes)

Yeah, Writing here on Lit has been something of an eye opener.

MJL
 
THROBBS said:
feedback for your story?
The Halloween one?

I've no idea which one. Lately all my email feedback comes without the story title so unless they mention it, I don't know which one it is.

If you guys want to see the email, I'll copy and paste it. Or I can PM it.

MJL
 
mjl2010 said:
I've no idea which one. Lately all my email feedback comes without the story title so unless they mention it, I don't know which one it is.

If you guys want to see the email, I'll copy and paste it. Or I can PM it.

MJL
I'm game..

God knows how many e-mails I used to get from wanna-be HNG doms wanting to fuck my face..(rape scene, Control, Chapter 2).
 
THROBBS said:
Yes, I realize. As I started it, I knew I had positioned them wrong, but plunged a head anyway.
I was thinking I could fake his other arm and with her left hand on his shoulder... well... not so much.. :rolleyes:

he'd also have to be holding her quite close... and then I might miss the nipple exposure, which I wanted to show.

It's kinda like the unnatural positions used in porn movies, so that penetration is visible. Sometimes it works...and others are just distracting.

I also like the "idea" (and maybe on a redo I'll get it) of how a man's leg will press between a woman's thighs when dancing. That was one of my first thrills with a real girl... slow dancing. mmmmm
I understand..
and yes, that is a most erotic moment..I love it too.

I can't remember the last time I felt that. *sigh*
 
THROBBS said:
what's an "HNG dom"? (obviously I am not one)
A Horny Net Geek - Dom subtype - thinks acting (the relevant word) the Dom will get him laid/pics/attention.

Their PM's usually start out like

"On yr nees, biatch"
 
Sent you both a copy.

I'm not sure exactly why it pissed me off. Maybe the idea I'd be cuckolded by him.

Still pissed off.

MJL
 
mjl2010 said:
Sent you both a copy.

I'm not sure exactly why it pissed me off. Maybe the idea I'd be cuckolded by him.

Still pissed off.

MJL
^ Lay your head, man. *strokes forehead*
 
THROBBS said:
It was inspired.
Inspired by an actual look that I received this weekend AT a masquerade ball.
Not that look... but a smoldering one, through a mask.
I photographed it.

Oooh lucky you to receive such a look. :nana:
 
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