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This is taken from Snooze You loose. A Smallvile Fanfic.

DAAAMN!

Clark groaned in pleasure as he felt her rub him through his pants. “Lois.” He moaned; sure enough he wouldn’t be able to watch the road while she was doing her work.

“Just drive.” She said, finding the button on his jeans and undoing it. Quickly, she found the zipper and ran it down as far as it would go. She smiled as she saw him already as erect as he could possibly get inside the restrictions of his pants and boxers. Licking her lips in a seductive fashion, she looked up at his closed eyes. “Keep your eyes on the road Smallville.” She teased.

“O-kay.” He said haltingly. His eyes went wide as he felt her warm hand suddenly reach inside his boxers and grab his member. He closed his eyes in pleasure and gulped. Opening them again, he tried to focus on the road. It wasn’t working very well, but he tried his best.

Lois could barely get her fingers wrapped around him as she began to edge it out of his boxers. With a final triumphant pull, it popped out. She smiled to herself as she positioned herself to take him in her mouth. She could suddenly feel the heat from him become too much as she began to feel her own underpants get a little damp in anticipation. Looking up to make sure he was still watching the road, she stroked him playfully, denying him the pleasure of her mouth on him for a few more moments. Slower and slower she moved her hand up and down him.

Clark moaned as she stroked him gently. As she began to slow down, he looked at her, but smiled as she had an evil grin slapped across her face. She was just toying with him. Problem was that it was working too well. “Lois-“ He said with a raspy voice, unable to get his mind completely off the touch of her hand.

“Quiet.” She whispered as she began to finally stroke him harder. Her mouth hovered over him just above the tip and she blew a few wisps of air on it to torture him. She could tell it was working as she felt him throb in her hand. Her left hand suddenly came down to rest under her breasts so that she could stay in position. Still stroking him, she gently brought her lips to him and kissed softly. She lingered on tip and stuck her tongue out just a little to tickle him.

Clark almost lost it right there, the feeling of her tongue and her lips on him too much to take. He fought the urge to explode, and in the end succeeded in doing so. Taking a deep sigh, he tried to calm himself so that he could prolong the pleasure as long as he could.

Lois still continued to stroke him as she kissed his tip over and over again softly. Every time she touched him with her lips, she could feel his body tense up. She smiled to herself as she realized he was actually fighting to keep himself from releasing. Ever more slowly, she dropped her mouth over the tip, allowing the edges of it to touch her lips. She gave it a few vacuum like sucks as she stopped her stroking. Parting her lips just a little, she took her tongue and used it to lick circles around the edge of his tip. Closing her eyes, she could hear him moan as she continued her assault on him.

She stopped her swirling as she brought her mouth up while still sucking. Once she left him, a loud slurping pop could be heard. She looked up at him for a second; her eyes at an angle so that she could only see his incredible smile. Grinning inwardly, she came back down on him with her lips pushing over the top and taking him in ever more. Again she sucked, but this time she bit him softly. It wasn’t enough to hurt him, but it was enough to make him feel it.

Clark felt her bite him. It was the most pleasurable thing he had ever felt. He struggled to keep his eyes open and on the road, but he managed to do so. He was just glad he could stay the speed limit. He thought the car was going to go the same rapid pace his heart was.

Her gag reflex wasn’t small by any means, but she knew full well she could never take him completely, and in a way that saddened her. Trying to make up for it, she slid her mouth back up him. She didn’t leave him this time though, instead, she moved back down him. Up and down she moved, her head bouncing like a bobble head as she sucked every time she came back up. Faster and faster she moved, her hair getting in her eyes.

Reaching down, he grabbed her hair and held it behind her head as she continued to suck him over and over. His hand almost let go of the hair that he was holding behind her head as he felt her squeeze the base with a thumb and index finger. He managed to hold onto the steering wheel too as he closed his eyes in ecstasy. Opening them back up, he made sure to stay within the yellow and white lines respectively. God, he was certainly having trouble, he thought to himself. She was just far too distracting.

The soft tugging on her hair each time she went down sent small erotic chills through her body and down to her core. The more she sucked him, the more she wanted him inside her. She would have sat on him as he drove, but she knew better than that. It was far too dangerous to do such a thing. She had read several reports on accidents that had been caused by such an act. Sighing in resignation, she turned herself completely over to working him with her mouth. Again she pressed her lips onto him even tighter. The increased pressure made the veins on his member pulsate and bulge. She took her mouth off him suddenly and licked him from top to bottom. The more she licked, the more she could hear him moan.

Clark shuddered in pleasure, his hand almost snapping the steering wheel as he tried desperately not to drive off the road. He had never had this type of thing done to him before. It was an entirely new and exhilarating sensation that he didn’t want to end.

Lois could feel herself getting wetter as she felt his hand still holding back her hair. She finished her licking and took him full on again. She sucked harder and harder on him as she started to pump the base of him with her right hand. Out of view, she was pinching and groping her own right breast with her left hand. Both the sensation of tasting him and groping herself was almost enough for her to climax without even being touched in her nether regions. She crowded up closer to him as she continued to suck with all her might.

He almost lost control of the car as his eyes closed. He opened them to find himself on the gravel shoulder. Steadying himself, he tried mightily to keep himself attentive enough to drive. He looked down and let go of her hair. She was close enough, and so he reached over and up under her skirt. Beginning to rub her clit with his index finger, he moaned at her continuous sucking.

Lois almost bit him as she felt his hand touch her. She almost exploded herself as she felt him rub her back and forth, the pressure increasing each time he rubbed. Her mouth twitched on him as she felt him casually slip a finger inside of her. She let out a moan on his member a second later, her insides jumping wildly at the touch of his finger in her.

Clark slowly moved his finger in and out. The sensation of her tightening around it was driving him up the wall. He couldn’t take it anymore, he had to pull over. Sliding off into the shoulder, he put the car into park and lost himself completely.

She could feel the car come to a stop. She knew full well he had given up on being able to drive. There was no way she would have been able to last as long as he did. The breath hitched in her lungs as she suddenly felt him slip another finger inside. As he began to trust them in harder and faster, she lost the ability to move on him. After a few seconds, he had slowed down enough for her to resume her assault.

Clark had realized his sliding in and out of her was interrupting her playing of his instrument. He slowed down on his end, allowing her to continuing to tune him. His body began to tighten up as he felt himself ready to explode. “Lois.” He said is desperation, trying to get her attention.

She heard his voice, just barely, but it was enough for her to understand what he meant. Turning onto her right side, she kept him in her mouth and position herself head just below him. A second later she felt him explode into the back of her throat. She almost choked, but she managed to swallow before another shot hit her full on. His moaning was driving her crazy as she finally swallowed the rest and began licking the remaining drops that hung from the tip. She looked up at him with curt smile playing on her lips. His eyes were staring down at her as he panted in pleasure.



:D I remember what that was Like!
 
i love fanfiction!
some of my favorites....

From the mission arcadia arc, 'Chasing the crown' for gundam wing

Next to the bonfire, there were blankets spread as well as the table, where the hot dog fixings along with paper plates, napkins and all kinds of drinks, cookies, chips, pickles and other accompaniments were packed in open wicker baskets.

Duo carefully deposited his burden in a safe spot before bouncing up towards the fire. "Looks excellent, ladies," he complimented, eyeing the roasting hot dogs with a dangerous gleam in his eye.

Dorothy quirked up a single brow and pointed towards one of the skewers that had been set off to one side, cooking as evenly as the others, but obviously singled out for some reason. "Thank you Duo. Try not to blow us up?" she returned.

With a triumphant crow of laughter, Duo pounced on the skewer and waggled it at Dorothy before thrusting it into the heart of the fire. "Not even I have enough talent to turn processed beef franks into an explosive compound without baked beans, Dorothy," he quipped back. "I'll save the weenie blowing for later."

Dorothy coughed for a moment, recovering with a bland, "How much?"

"Not for sale," Duo answered with a wink.

"What's not for sale?" Heero asked, wandering over to check on the hot dogs.

"The latest release from Maxwell Productions... 'How To Blow Your Weenie... Up'," the braided pilot said, watching avidly as his hot dog crisped and blackened.

Wufei coughed.

"So how do you know when they're done, Duo?" Kenny asked, coming over to watch the incineration process.

"Depends on how well done ya like em, kiddo," Duo replied, pulling his now flaming frank from the fire to display to the boy. "For me, the first one always has to be just shy of charcoal... but usually, when the weenies plump up, they're ready to be eaten."

Wufei put his hand over his mouth and coughed again.

"Are you all right, Wufei?" Relena asked, concerned. "Here, have a drink of soda...”

Heero took a deep breath and turned to look meaningfully out at the ocean. The affect was lost, however, by the wide grin on his face and the slight shaking of his shoulders.

"Ok, I guess it's done," Kenny said. "What do I do with it now?"

Duo leaned forward and blew out the flames on his hot dog with an exaggerated puff, smiling innocently at Wufei before returning his attention to Kenny. "Now, we get our buns ready."

Wufei glared at Duo and picked up a hot dog bun, "Yes," he said, looking at Duo. "You have to squirt something on the buns, or the hot dog... or both, before sliding the meat in."

Kenny nodded and followed the instructions carefully, unaware of anything odd about the conversation.

"Then, of course, you eat it," Heero managed, attempting to maintain a neutral face.

"But, be very careful," Trowa said, walking up. "The meat is hot and the bun doesn't have enough insulation to absorb all of the energy."

Carter glanced at the older boys and suddenly ran off with his hot dog to sit on a beach chair, trying not to blush or giggle.

Dorothy merely plucked one of the remaining skewers from the fire and offered it towards the Vice-Minister. "Weenie, Miss Relena?" she asked sweetly.

"Would you please place it in my buns, Dorothy?" Relena returned in the same tone, eyes twinkling.

"But of course. Do you need anything else on that... Add a little flavor?" Dorothy asked, carefully doing as Relena had instructed.

"I'm afraid I'm a purist, Dorothy," Relena said, biting into the hot dog happily. "Just weenie and bun for me."

"I never figured you for the type that liked it dry, Relena," Duo remarked as he finished preparing his charcoal masterpiece, complete with everything he could stuff in between the bread, including a couple of crushed chips.

"Well if I'm eating it, I want the flavor to be unadulterated," she returned, blue eyes gleaming. "But I do like watching others enjoy theirs any way they choose."

"Hey, food!" Duan called, seeing Kenny and Carter chowing down. He scampered over and relieved the cooks of two hot dogs, before taking them back over to Kenny.

Kenny was already on number three.

Heero looked down at the overstuffed hot dog that Duo held in his hand. Taking the braided pilot's hand, he raised the hot dog up and took a bite. "It's always better," he said around the bite of hot dog, "... when it's stolen."

Duo mock-scowled, pulling his purloined dinner away again. "Just for that, no more frank for you."

Heero bowed. "Hai," he said. "It will be an honor to starve. A bite of your dog is all I require."

"Yeah? Well, just be careful... With all the stuff I put on it, my dogs bite back," Duo remarked archly before cramming about a third of the remainder of his masterpiece in his mouth.

"Why, Wufei, I didn't know you liked weenies," Relena said curiously. "You have two... in one hot dog bun!"

Glancing at Duo and Heero, Wufei said coolly, "Yes, two in one bun is something new, I've never tried it before. I wonder if I'll like it."

Cobalt blue eyes locked onto Wufei's dark eyes. "Mission accepted," Heero said, quietly.

Duo, meanwhile, was struggling to not choke as he attempted to chew and laugh at the same time, thankful that the rosy glare of the fire hid most of the faint flush creeping up his cheeks.
 
and another.....

From Harry Potter, "Moonlight fair"

Draco smiled wryly. “I as just trying to think if I have ever made anyone actually happy.” He said.

“Isn’t it strange?” Harry asked. “The Weasleys actually do that often. You can see it in their faces. And, it’s simple things, remembering to carry something down the stairs for someone else, sharing a treat or winning a good game of cards. When any of the kids clean up anything, clear out the garden gnomes, or pick a bunch of flowers. They thrive on it. They fight too, argue and fuss, but all that seems secondary. They live pretty much without spite.”

Draco stared at Harry, he was using the damn Weasleys as examples.

Harry grinned, reading Draco’s thoughts, “I know you don’t like them, Draco. But, they are the only family, Wizarding or Muggle that I know.”

“They seem very volatile,” He said.

“Yes, they are.” Harry replied. “I think they can be that way because they have each other to rely on. They have a kind of freedom to be different because they know they are loved. Only Percy has stepped outside the family, and even he would be welcomed back at any time or if he were in any kind of need.”

“I guess you are right. I know I wanted to please my parents, but I don’t think it was to make them happy as much as proud.” Draco answered soberly.

“It’s a matter of values,” said Harry. “The Dursley’s, my relatives, don’t think about happiness either. They indulge Dudley beyond what is healthy, but it’s to prove they can. They tell each other that they make him happy, but he is a miserable person anyway. They tell me, as well as each other, that I have been the cross they bear and I have prevented their happiness. I am sure they are relieved I am gone for good, but I doubt it makes them any happier in the end.”

“Do you really think it is a commodity that matters to most people?” Draco asked.

“Yes,” Harry said definitely. “I think it is what drives people to be with one another, to work together and live together. Happiness is a goal of sorts, and with it, most people feel they can accomplish almost anything.”



Link is for a 'Fake' (yaoi manga) one named First night someone took it upon themselves to write out their sex scene instead of just the oh so hot pictures

http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_ch.php/123900/424519#fic_c (FYI Mediaminer.org is awesome for finding fanfics.... as is adultfanfiction.net)

Ah fanfics, they can crack you up, burn you up, and even make you profoundly thoughtfull! GO CRAZY FANS WITH TOO MUCH TIME ON THEIR HANDS!!!!!! (myself included)

(If you want a gay drama involving two cops in new york and following their courtship along with their cases than Fake is for you i give it 5 stars and two thumbs up :D and oooh gods the hotness when they finally do have sex........)
 
fgarvb1 said:
This is taken from Snooze You loose. A Smallvile Fanfic.

DAAAMN!

Clark groaned in pleasure as he felt her rub him through his pants. “Lois.” He moaned; sure enough he wouldn’t be able to watch the road while she was doing her work.

“Just drive.” She said, finding the button on his jeans and undoing it. Quickly, she found the zipper and ran it down as far as it would go. She smiled as she saw him already as erect as he could possibly get inside the restrictions of his pants and boxers. Licking her lips in a seductive fashion, she looked up at his closed eyes. “Keep your eyes on the road Smallville.” She teased.

“O-kay.” He said haltingly. His eyes went wide as he felt her warm hand suddenly reach inside his boxers and grab his member. He closed his eyes in pleasure and gulped. Opening them again, he tried to focus on the road. It wasn’t working very well, but he tried his best.

Lois could barely get her fingers wrapped around him as she began to edge it out of his boxers. With a final triumphant pull, it popped out. She smiled to herself as she positioned herself to take him in her mouth. She could suddenly feel the heat from him become too much as she began to feel her own underpants get a little damp in anticipation. Looking up to make sure he was still watching the road, she stroked him playfully, denying him the pleasure of her mouth on him for a few more moments. Slower and slower she moved her hand up and down him.

Clark moaned as she stroked him gently. As she began to slow down, he looked at her, but smiled as she had an evil grin slapped across her face. She was just toying with him. Problem was that it was working too well. “Lois-“ He said with a raspy voice, unable to get his mind completely off the touch of her hand.

“Quiet.” She whispered as she began to finally stroke him harder. Her mouth hovered over him just above the tip and she blew a few wisps of air on it to torture him. She could tell it was working as she felt him throb in her hand. Her left hand suddenly came down to rest under her breasts so that she could stay in position. Still stroking him, she gently brought her lips to him and kissed softly. She lingered on tip and stuck her tongue out just a little to tickle him.

Clark almost lost it right there, the feeling of her tongue and her lips on him too much to take. He fought the urge to explode, and in the end succeeded in doing so. Taking a deep sigh, he tried to calm himself so that he could prolong the pleasure as long as he could.

Lois still continued to stroke him as she kissed his tip over and over again softly. Every time she touched him with her lips, she could feel his body tense up. She smiled to herself as she realized he was actually fighting to keep himself from releasing. Ever more slowly, she dropped her mouth over the tip, allowing the edges of it to touch her lips. She gave it a few vacuum like sucks as she stopped her stroking. Parting her lips just a little, she took her tongue and used it to lick circles around the edge of his tip. Closing her eyes, she could hear him moan as she continued her assault on him.

She stopped her swirling as she brought her mouth up while still sucking. Once she left him, a loud slurping pop could be heard. She looked up at him for a second; her eyes at an angle so that she could only see his incredible smile. Grinning inwardly, she came back down on him with her lips pushing over the top and taking him in ever more. Again she sucked, but this time she bit him softly. It wasn’t enough to hurt him, but it was enough to make him feel it.

Clark felt her bite him. It was the most pleasurable thing he had ever felt. He struggled to keep his eyes open and on the road, but he managed to do so. He was just glad he could stay the speed limit. He thought the car was going to go the same rapid pace his heart was.

Her gag reflex wasn’t small by any means, but she knew full well she could never take him completely, and in a way that saddened her. Trying to make up for it, she slid her mouth back up him. She didn’t leave him this time though, instead, she moved back down him. Up and down she moved, her head bouncing like a bobble head as she sucked every time she came back up. Faster and faster she moved, her hair getting in her eyes.

Reaching down, he grabbed her hair and held it behind her head as she continued to suck him over and over. His hand almost let go of the hair that he was holding behind her head as he felt her squeeze the base with a thumb and index finger. He managed to hold onto the steering wheel too as he closed his eyes in ecstasy. Opening them back up, he made sure to stay within the yellow and white lines respectively. God, he was certainly having trouble, he thought to himself. She was just far too distracting.

The soft tugging on her hair each time she went down sent small erotic chills through her body and down to her core. The more she sucked him, the more she wanted him inside her. She would have sat on him as he drove, but she knew better than that. It was far too dangerous to do such a thing. She had read several reports on accidents that had been caused by such an act. Sighing in resignation, she turned herself completely over to working him with her mouth. Again she pressed her lips onto him even tighter. The increased pressure made the veins on his member pulsate and bulge. She took her mouth off him suddenly and licked him from top to bottom. The more she licked, the more she could hear him moan.

Clark shuddered in pleasure, his hand almost snapping the steering wheel as he tried desperately not to drive off the road. He had never had this type of thing done to him before. It was an entirely new and exhilarating sensation that he didn’t want to end.

Lois could feel herself getting wetter as she felt his hand still holding back her hair. She finished her licking and took him full on again. She sucked harder and harder on him as she started to pump the base of him with her right hand. Out of view, she was pinching and groping her own right breast with her left hand. Both the sensation of tasting him and groping herself was almost enough for her to climax without even being touched in her nether regions. She crowded up closer to him as she continued to suck with all her might.

He almost lost control of the car as his eyes closed. He opened them to find himself on the gravel shoulder. Steadying himself, he tried mightily to keep himself attentive enough to drive. He looked down and let go of her hair. She was close enough, and so he reached over and up under her skirt. Beginning to rub her clit with his index finger, he moaned at her continuous sucking.

Lois almost bit him as she felt his hand touch her. She almost exploded herself as she felt him rub her back and forth, the pressure increasing each time he rubbed. Her mouth twitched on him as she felt him casually slip a finger inside of her. She let out a moan on his member a second later, her insides jumping wildly at the touch of his finger in her.

Clark slowly moved his finger in and out. The sensation of her tightening around it was driving him up the wall. He couldn’t take it anymore, he had to pull over. Sliding off into the shoulder, he put the car into park and lost himself completely.

She could feel the car come to a stop. She knew full well he had given up on being able to drive. There was no way she would have been able to last as long as he did. The breath hitched in her lungs as she suddenly felt him slip another finger inside. As he began to trust them in harder and faster, she lost the ability to move on him. After a few seconds, he had slowed down enough for her to resume her assault.

Clark had realized his sliding in and out of her was interrupting her playing of his instrument. He slowed down on his end, allowing her to continuing to tune him. His body began to tighten up as he felt himself ready to explode. “Lois.” He said is desperation, trying to get her attention.

She heard his voice, just barely, but it was enough for her to understand what he meant. Turning onto her right side, she kept him in her mouth and position herself head just below him. A second later she felt him explode into the back of her throat. She almost choked, but she managed to swallow before another shot hit her full on. His moaning was driving her crazy as she finally swallowed the rest and began licking the remaining drops that hung from the tip. She looked up at him with curt smile playing on her lips. His eyes were staring down at her as he panted in pleasure.



:D I remember what that was Like!


Reminds me of this story: http://www.larryniven.org/stories/Man_of_Steel_Woman_of_Kleenex.shtml
 
Nice story

So, pardon my ignorance, but just what is fanfic?

I always wondered if Superman had super erections, or was super in bed.
Or was he fast like a speeding bullet? Or hard as steel?
If I wrote a SM story, I would have to make hime be super in sex also.

And what about Lana (zug-zug Lana)?
We know Lois is his love, but Lana would be a hot affair!
 
Fanfics are....

Fan Fiction (or fanfics) are stories about movies/books/tv shows (etc.) that are written by fans of them. they can be anything.

for instance a harry potter fanfic is a fanfic where someone takes the harry potter world (with a proper disclaimer of course) and makes up a story using their own thoughts etc (Say my favorite of Harry and Draco ending up having sex which would never actually happen in the books/movies no matter how hott it would be)

Some terms that indicate how close to the original story etc.
AU - alternate reality - same characters new world or changed plot etc (more of a what if this happened to them?)
AP - alternate pairing (i think) - a pairing that isn't intended by the author or fans find odd (think of hagrid with anyone *shudder*)
PWP - Plot? what plot? (or i prefer 'passion without plot') - short to the point very minimal set up for sex or sometimes just a funny thing that happens with no plot (say.... someone decides to bother someone in funny ways.... not much plot there huh?)

there are many others that indicate different things by which we clasify our works if you want to check out others i'm sure you can search and find an online dictionary of terms :)

anyone care to add any other definitions or did i cover everything?
 
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