This is my first attempt what do you think?

[Scarlett Harlot]

This is a long standing fantasy and I finally decided to commit it to black and white. I am thrilled to see it posted on the site but what do the readers really think?

 

[Quasimodem]

If you want the good people here to read your story, perhaps you should let them know that the title is "Kidnapped?!?" and that it is posted under the NEW and BDSM Categories.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=71245

We are a lazy bunch, at best.

 

[damppanties]

And this post would work much better in the Story Feedback Forum