This hitch hiker I saw....

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[Axeltheswede]

hitchhiker

I think it can go a lot of different ways. It is generally considered poor writing to rely on coincidence. But when you start with one, you can get away with it.

I can see the hitchhiker as some disguised mystical being. She is being punished by having to hitch a ride from the same place, over and over. She has knowledge way beyond her apparent years. The young couple have an ongoing threesome with her. As the mystical creature is satisfied sexually, she reveals secrets that unlock keys to great personal power.

Would anyone like to supply the next step?

 

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[SexyChele]

I've based my "Cassie" series on a female hitchiker, and so far they have done pretty well. In each story I put her in a different situation, so while the character remains the same, the people she meets and has encounters with are all very different.

Go for it. I think many people have fantasies of meeting people and having sex on the spur of the moment. No, it may not be "real life", but it can make for great fantasy!

 

[Guest]

Re: hitchhiker

... It is generally considered poor writing to rely on coincidence ...

For the driver of the car, seeing a hitch-hiker is a coincidence. For the hitch-hiker seeing a car driven by a stranger and going the way you want to go is planned.

SO for a couple-based story it would be coincidence, but SexyChele's Cassie stories aren't coincidental.

Now my brain hurts.

 

[Chicklet]

Hrm..

I don't know how many hitch-hikers there are in other states, but whenever I set out on the freeway/highway I see at least a dozen. That's on an average of a 2 hour trip (to Portland)

However, most of my hitch-hikers are hippy's, complete with hemp clothing and dreds they've been growing for all of their 50 years.

Chicklet

 

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[NiteRidder]

Possible Story Line

Would like to see the Hitchhiker who is picked up as a sweet Pretty Young thing but ass suggested by a previous contributor be instead a lady of some
experience - especially for her age.

Would like the see the male enticed by her young nieve attitude and yet thrilled to learn of her "experience" with female/female sex something the Wife has often fantasized to him about -

Good Segway to the motel room where little miss hitchhiker turns out to be a very worldly young lady who coupled with the wife take this husband into a world that he has never even imagined. A literal Sexual Twilight Zone where he is the main dish.

Oh well its an idea -

NiteRidder

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[Axeltheswede]

hitchhiker

You're right about that old series. I think it started on HBO. If I remember correctly, the hitchhiker was just a gimmick to introduce stories about other people. At the end, the hitcher came back on with some cheesy moral to the story. Something profound like, "Ah, strange pussy can kill you, dudes" or "Don't shit where you eat, OK?"

Sexychele's Cassie series was so good, I forgot all about the hitchhiking aspect of it.

No one likes my mystical creature hitchhiker, I guess. Fine. I'm taking my football and going home. So there.

(Supply mental picture here. Poor Axel, clutching his football, pouting, kicking the dirt, as he shuffles off home)

 

[SexyChele]

Re: Possible Story Line

Would like to see the Hitchhiker who is picked up as a sweet Pretty Young thing but ass suggested by a previous contributor be instead a lady of some
experience - especially for her age.

Would like the see the male enticed by her young nieve attitude and yet thrilled to learn of her "experience" with female/female sex something the Wife has often fantasized to him about -

Good Segway to the motel room where little miss hitchhiker turns out to be a very worldly young lady who coupled with the wife take this husband into a world that he has never even imagined. A literal Sexual Twilight Zone where he is the main dish.

Oh well its an idea -

NiteRidder

"D"

I'm currently working on the next "Cassie" story, and it follows very closely along this line. Just a few little tweaks and kinks, but it's almost the same story. Should be on Lit sometime early June.




Pretty: Thank you! Have gotten a lot of good feedback on sweet little Cassie - hope to soon have illustrations of her here at Lit soon! I think you should go ahead with your idea. It sounds like a good one!

 

[Chicklet]

Re: Possible Story Line

Would like to see the Hitchhiker who is picked up as a sweet Pretty Young thing but ass suggested by a previous contributor be instead a lady of some
experience - especially for her age.

I like that idea, a young but experienced girl out on the road gets picked up by maybe a christian couple who thinks that it's their duty to god to pick her up and help her along her way. Then she seduces them!

Chicklet

 

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