The Ultimate, Sick, Loving Wives Story

Rumple Foreskin

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The Ultimate, Sick, Loving Wives Story

Most folks who drift into the Hangout quickly learn the Loving Wives category has a well-deserved reputation as a free-fire zone that often produces a large number of vituperative comments.

A discussion about that broke out this morning in Box’s thread “Fuck You Zeb.” OhMissScarlett was moved to wonder if she should try to write, “the ultimate sick loving wives story.”

Always ready to give sage wisdom, counsel, and advice, several AH folks made SWC&A type suggestions. Here are some things mentioned by R.Richard and Colly.

What would you add to help OhMissScarlett create her dream, (“nightmare” might be more appropriate) story that would generate a mega number of hostile comments?

Rumple Foreskin :cool:

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OhMissScarlett
That's great. It makes me want to write like the ultimate sick loving wives story. I've gotten some polite angry feedback, but no one's ever told me to fuck off or anything. *sigh*


R. Richard
Despite the anonymous comment, not everyone in the Loving Wives category is part of an insane lynch mob, just most of them.

The problem with the Loving Wives category is as follows:

Some of the readers want only loving between husband and wife.

Some of the readers want the wife to cheat on the husband who is too much of a wimp to do anything.

Some of the readers want the dominant husband to force his innocent wife to undergo a gangbang.

Some of the readers want the dominant wife to force her wimp husband to watch as she willingly submits to a gangbang.

Some of the readers want the wife to be voluntarily/involuntarily gangbanged, including her husband joining in.

If the author does not please each and every reader, the lynch mob forms.

Go ahead, ask me why R. Richard does not write LW stories.



Colly
You forgot the clique who demands the wife get pregnant.

The group who demands the husband exact his revenge.

the group who will one bomb you for the use of a condom.

etc.

It's like a trip to a football game, can't tell the players without a program.
 
Isn't it a bit dangerous?
Do the trolls seek out your other work?
 
Perhaps we should create a little AH challenge for the Loving Wives story that gets the most hate mail. ;)
 
Rumple Foreskin said:
The Ultimate, Sick, Loving Wives Story

Most folks who drift into the Hangout quickly learn the Loving Wives category has a well-deserved reputation as a free-fire zone that often produces a large number of vituperative comments.

A discussion about that broke out this morning in Box’s thread “Fuck You Zeb.” OhMissScarlett was moved to wonder if she should try to write, “the ultimate sick loving wives story.”

Always ready to give sage wisdom, counsel, and advice, several AH folks made SWC&A type suggestions. Here are some things mentioned by R.Richard and Colly.

What would you add to help OhMissScarlett create her dream, (“nightmare” might be more appropriate) story that would generate a mega number of hostile comments?

Rumple Foreskin :cool:

==

OhMissScarlett
That's great. It makes me want to write like the ultimate sick loving wives story. I've gotten some polite angry feedback, but no one's ever told me to fuck off or anything. *sigh*


R. Richard
Despite the anonymous comment, not everyone in the Loving Wives category is part of an insane lynch mob, just most of them.

The problem with the Loving Wives category is as follows:

Some of the readers want only loving between husband and wife.

Some of the readers want the wife to cheat on the husband who is too much of a wimp to do anything.

Some of the readers want the dominant husband to force his innocent wife to undergo a gangbang.

Some of the readers want the dominant wife to force her wimp husband to watch as she willingly submits to a gangbang.

Some of the readers want the wife to be voluntarily/involuntarily gangbanged, including her husband joining in.

If the author does not please each and every reader, the lynch mob forms.

Go ahead, ask me why R. Richard does not write LW stories.



Colly
You forgot the clique who demands the wife get pregnant.

The group who demands the husband exact his revenge.

the group who will one bomb you for the use of a condom.

etc.

It's like a trip to a football game, can't tell the players without a program.


Loving wives is about chicks willing to fuck the football team when her husband wants it - thats why she is loving :D She does anything for him, but then he turns and hates it - and it is a very mysoginist category - but thats what it is -she gives but no matter what it is not enough until hubby gets her for whatever reason and tells her she is the slut she is. Loving wives who do the bidding and then get reamed for it and the husband fucks her like mad after. Complex - yet that is my understanding of the category.

I hate the category, but the real LOVING and doting wife is in couples, that is what I have seen/ read. :) Its just a funny worded category that needs to be ... split up and understood by readers and writers alike. :)
 
I'm still fine tuning my tale of the cheating wife who leaves her wimp husband after gangbanging a lesbian motorcycle gang. ;)
 
i had an idea for a loving wives story once, but then i read the comments about that category here, and thus never wrote it.
 
I must be the only person to write a LW story and not get much feedback. My loving wife was neglected by her working hubby, started an online fetishy/d/s sort-of relationship with a guy with a prudish wife...then it turns out hubby was the guy, egging her on to return to the delightful slutty ways she had when they were dating.

The LW crowd really didn't have much to say about it, although there were a couple PCs, and a decent score. When I moved it to Fetish, it got a better reception and more feedback.

I'm miffed that I didn't get the LW 'fuck you' feedback, though. I'd been looking forward to it. :D
 
sophia jane said:
Perhaps we should create a little AH challenge for the Loving Wives story that gets the most hate mail. ;)
i like that idea. count me in.
 
Norajane said:
I must be the only person to write a LW story and not get much feedback. My loving wife was neglected by her working hubby, started an online fetishy/d/s sort-of relationship with a guy with a prudish wife...then it turns out hubby was the guy, egging her on to return to the delightful slutty ways she had when they were dating.

The LW crowd really didn't have much to say about it, although there were a couple PCs, and a decent score. When I moved it to Fetish, it got a better reception and more feedback.

I'm miffed that I didn't get the LW 'fuck you' feedback, though. I'd been looking forward to it. :D
probably because it turned out to be the wife's husband she was cheating online with.
 
imalickin said:
probably because it turned out to be the wife's husband she was cheating online with.

Yes, but she got pregnant! That shoulda counted for something. ;)
 
Norajane said:
Yes, but she got pregnant! That shoulda counted for something. ;)
but it was by her husband, does that count? in the loving wives category?
 
imalickin said:
but it was by her husband, does that count? in the loving wives category?

But see, that's precisely why I should have gotten some hate mail...because it was her husband and they don't like that. I think.
 
OhMissScarlett said:
I'm still fine tuning my tale of the cheating wife who leaves her wimp husband after gangbanging a lesbian motorcycle gang. ;)


Its not loving wives. I might consider it feminization? :D
 
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You forgot the "Husband has a really tiny penis" group....
 
Norajane said:
But see, that's precisely why I should have gotten some hate mail...because it was her husband and they don't like that. I think.
there are several factions in LW.

you should go read this thread.
 
imalickin said:
and everyone else she fucks has a king kong dong.

Yes, and there must be butt-sex with the kingliest, kongliest, dongliest.
 
imalickin said:
ok that works...i think. and hugh balls. i like balls.
Hugh Balls. I remember him. I think.

And the trick would do a reconciliation and divorce simultaneously.
 
Hm, I had a an idea for a LW story a long time ago, and I finally started working on it yesterday, but I had no idea it was such a controversial category! In this case, the "loving" the wife is doing is definitely not with her husband.

Basically, she's stuck in a covenant marriage in Louisiana (an extra-strict marital contract that is very difficult to get out of, only legal in three states). Her husband turns out to be an abusive asshole, but the judge won't grant her a divorce because she can't prove the abuse and she has no proof that either of them has been cheating. So she eventually decides to have a friend make a film of her getting gangbanged to show her husband and the judge as proof, and to freak out the husband so much he agrees to divorce her. I'm actually considering making this my own twisted Valentine's contest story. :devil:

Should I stick with LW, or just put it in Group Sex?
 
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