The Tour Pt. III

[HSWriter]

I was just wondering what everyone thought about my newest story, "The Tour Pt. III". I previously recieved a lot of feedback on the first two parts of this story and I was wondering how everyone thought that it stacked up against the others. Is it better? Worse? or about the same?

Just wondering
HSWriter

Also, I was wondering whether anyone thinks that I should continue the series. Because if no one thinks that I should, then I will start on other projects. Thanks!

[This message has been edited by HSWriter (edited 01-21-2000).]

 

[Hornytoad]

write some more in the seires. i think it is good so far and can't wait for the next part

 

[Guest]

i liked the part 3 but you have to keep up the series its really great...only slight complaint is that none of the three girls were involoved sexually. in hte upcoming ones make sure they are greatly involved in that respect...keep up the good work the series kicks but

 

[HSWriter]

Maverick, I am trying to hold off on having the three girls all together. The way I have it planned, there will be one episode with just Britney Spears, one more episode with Laetitia Casta and Frederique Van Der Wal (Also including Jessica Simpson) and then I may end the series with one big orgy with the three girls and the main character. Those plans are subject to change though...

 

[Guest]

HS i didn't mean to sound like i hated the story i liked it and don't change anything cuz of me...just keep doing what you think is good and keep up the overall good work

 

[Guest]

I think this is a great series your writing and you should keep up the good work

 

[HSWriter]

Part IV should be up soon! I just sent it in, for all of you who are interested...