The Round Up

[toolkeeper]

Where would I get in touch with the author of the story "The Round Up" (Loving Wives section). There was a follow up story by another author which was quite the buzz kill. I've outlined stories of additional wives running parallel to the original with different outcomes.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

Where would I get in touch with the author of the story "The Round Up" (Loving Wives section). ...

At http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=143105&page=contact would be a good place to start.

You might get a better response if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

Then go to http://forum.literotica.com/member.php?u=143105 and send a PM to the author concerned

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Yep! Contact the author, not the Story Ideas board.

 

[hotsnatch6]

Yep! Contact the author, not the Story Ideas board.

Exactly! We need to stick to the point in here. I've learned my lesson.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

Exactly! We need to stick to the point in here. I've learned my lesson.

Is there the makings of a story in the way you were taught a lesson? Caning? Sexual abuse? Lysistrata treatment? Or was it just boring old advice?

 

[hotsnatch6]

Is there the makings of a story in the way you were taught a lesson? Caning? Sexual abuse? Lysistrata treatment? Or was it just boring old advice?

It wasn't exactly boring old advice, bur rather the incessant reminders of an overbearing stickler whose steadfast adherence to rules is the result of either an overly harsh and legalistic upbringing at the hands of an alcoholic father or the frustrated desires of a would-be hall monitor whose lifelong dream was crushed by the capricious whims of her sexually frustrated schoolmarm. Or something.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Now that's funny, Snatch.

 

[Candaul_Von_Stuck]

All sound advice, but in relation to the original post; why not just do your own? I'd never advocate the wholesale ripping of another story but I remember the one you're talking about, read it several times, thing it was a great concept with a good execution, but I don't think the premise is so unique that the basic idea of it couldn't be borrowed without much guilt.

If you haven't read it it's basically an organized competition for rich people to screw women, basically what every clique of guys is already like only with better suits and a huge pot of money. There was a lot of promise in that one, too bad it wasn't expanded by the original author.

 

[Deadwood]

I am open minded when it comes to critiques I mean hey, some of the stories I write are better then others...that is just the way it is, but to be honest with you, I am far to creative to want to write sequels even though I have been asked many times.

It never hurts to ask of course, but just trying to show an aspect of things from an authors view.

 

[toolkeeper]

No desire to be caned. Thanks for the advice.

As to sequels/prequels/parallels, i liked the concept of the story. I've written stories before (published three times in PH Letters including two letters of month about a decade ago). Need to get my mojo back and doing it this way suits me best.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Need to get my mojo back and doing it this way suits me best.

Good luck and I hope you have fun.