The Return of FantasiesOnly

[MyRubiLips]

He comes. He posts many one-liner threads. He gets butthurt when people collaborate ideas and do not say they like/will write his idea word for word in a new story! He posts of boys and girls, then adds "18 of course" in parenthasis so no one will call him a pedo again. Drama happens. Does he begin to insult other members like a hurt child? Does he skulk off in a huff and leave Lit for years ago?


Oh the possibilities!

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

I know exactly who you mean, too....

 

[MyRubiLips]

I mean no one! This is a new story idea!

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Ah, okay.

 

[Strangebuddy]

*looks upward as reference flies over his head*

Well, if this is going to be a story idea let's do a pitch then. Our protagonist continues abusing lit posters, spamming the boards, and whining to high-heaven about everything until the Story Idea forum becomes very unpleasant to be in and even the regulars begin avoiding it.

Our protagonist does not leave this time. Even though his stories aren't being worked on, he just keeps posting and spamming, incredulous of the fact that he has soured everyone towards him.

However, a new poster appears who seems eager to work on a project but doesn't have any ideas of his or her own. The new poster offers to write the story and learns that our protagonist is even worse hen he is getting what he wants. He fills up the writer's PM box, messaging him or her every hour and complaining any time the writer wants to add on some details or create an additional scene. He even verbally abuses them over them Yahoo messenger and keeps demanding updates on how the story is going. He then starts requesting rewrites and additional stories as the writer finishes chapters and practically threatens the writer when he or she posts a chapter to the main site.

In the end, the writer somehow endures the Sisyphean challenge and gives our protagonist what he wants. There's no thanks, just a begrudging "about time" and reminder that he doesn't want the stories published.


Our protagonist reads the fruit of his badgering...every detail in place and no extraneous bits. As he reads though, he feels himself being drawn into his fantasy, until he physically arrives in it. At first he is excited and happily plays his part in it. However, he quickly discovers that he has been trapped in a living hell. He must play out his part exactly. The only words he can say are the ones in the story, he can only wear the same clothes, and he can only pursue the same character. Any time he tries to physically go against the story (Trying to run away for example), a loud blaring noise that rocks his whole body sounds making him writhe in pain until he does as he is supposed to. This even extends to the sex scenes. He always finishes at the same time and feels the same way every time...he even makes the same kind of grunt when he ejaculates.

When the story ends, another begins. Also, all of those scenes and tidbits that he told the writer to scrap? They had things like proper transitions and made things feel more natural. So he might find himself starving and exhausted since the writer was told that there was no need to mention his character eating a quick bite or being asleep at any point. He smells horrendous too from lack of bathing and his clothes are exactly the same. The transitions are the worst though, as he might find himself hopping into a car and then instantly be in another scene without any buildup. The agonizing sound attacking him if he fails to quickly accustom himself to it.

In the end, there is no escape. He continues on a completely linnear existence; no surprises, no variation, and no relief.

 

[lovecraft68]

So this is a story idea?

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

*looks upward as reference flies over his head*

Well, if this is going to be a story idea let's do a pitch then. Our protagonist continues abusing lit posters, spamming the boards, and whining to high-heaven about everything until the Story Idea forum becomes very unpleasant to be in and even the regulars begin avoiding it.

Our protagonist does not leave this time. Even though his stories aren't being worked on, he just keeps posting and spamming, incredulous of the fact that he has soured everyone towards him.

However, a new poster appears who seems eager to work on a project but doesn't have any ideas of his or her own. The new poster offers to write the story and learns that our protagonist is even worse hen he is getting what he wants. He fills up the writer's PM box, messaging him or her every hour and complaining any time the writer wants to add on some details or create an additional scene. He even verbally abuses them over them Yahoo messenger and keeps demanding updates on how the story is going. He then starts requesting rewrites and additional stories as the writer finishes chapters and practically threatens the writer when he or she posts a chapter to the main site.

In the end, the writer somehow endures the Sisyphean challenge and gives our protagonist what he wants. There's no thanks, just a begrudging "about time" and reminder that he doesn't want the stories published.


Our protagonist reads the fruit of his badgering...every detail in place and no extraneous bits. As he reads though, he feels himself being drawn into his fantasy, until he physically arrives in it. At first he is excited and happily plays his part in it. However, he quickly discovers that he has been trapped in a living hell. He must play out his part exactly. The only words he can say are the ones in the story, he can only wear the same clothes, and he can only pursue the same character. Any time he tries to physically go against the story (Trying to run away for example), a loud blaring noise that rocks his whole body sounds making him writhe in pain until he does as he is supposed to. This even extends to the sex scenes. He always finishes at the same time and feels the same way every time...he even makes the same kind of grunt when he ejaculates.

When the story ends, another begins. Also, all of those scenes and tidbits that he told the writer to scrap? They had things like proper transitions and made things feel more natural. So he might find himself starving and exhausted since the writer was told that there was no need to mention his character eating a quick bite or being asleep at any point. He smells horrendous too from lack of bathing and his clothes are exactly the same. The transitions are the worst though, as he might find himself hopping into a car and then instantly be in another scene without any buildup. The agonizing sound attacking him if he fails to quickly accustom himself to it.

In the end, there is no escape. He continues on a completely linnear existence; no surprises, no variation, and no relief.

I love it....

 

[MyRubiLips]

So this is a story idea?

I love Strangebuddy's take on this!

 

[atariblue]

Sounds like an erotic Twilight Zone episode or The Outer Limits.