The PURE EVIL Thread

Arden said:
Khaddy,

Why don't you post it here? We'd love to read it. Yeah, I put songs up if they have to do with darkness, evil, or the devil.

:devil:
 
Soron said:
as much as you can entice out of me, sweetheart ;)

how much can you handle? :devil:
:rose:

What do you have to offer?
~snickering~

:devil:
 
Actually, that may not be wicked enough to qualify for this place.
(But I still like it)

:devil:
 
Arden said:
I like people who write wicked poetry and stories.

:devil:

*whistling* Just call me Sam... lol


okay Sam......
you know what Sam got in the story too don't you? :devil:
 
hmmm alright, i'll post it.



not titled yet.



Whistling wind blows across the tundra,
the tall grass bends in the breeze.
Your hair drifts across your face,
the erie calm betraying your mind.
The sun finally shuts it eye,
and the moon, filling the sky silver black

You straighten out of your crouch,
the leather creaks like old joints.
You turn your head and glance,
the crest of the hill so like a void.
Whatever passes across it,
so much different from now.

Then in the distance you hear,
the drums sounding out in the night.
Their booming laugh rattling
your bones as they draw near.
Filling your mind with pictures,
burning villages set in secrecy.

The screams of villagers aflame,
your lands razed at your heels.
Defenders slain, while the army
from out of nowhere advances.
Beasts freed from their cages,
roaming amongst the streets.

Swords are drawn amonst your group,
their sound searing the night.
From over the hill birds soar,
panic sending them in all directions.
Over the rise come a cry,
and hundreds of dark black shapes flow.

You throw your sword forth,
it's bright glow like a lance in the night.
The men charge and meet in battle,
heads are hewn and limbs torn free.
Yet in the end all is right,
you stare at the blood soaked ground.

The uprising quelled in hours,
you walk back to your home.
Your people are free from these monsters,
their ideals so different from yours.
Thoughts of freedom from opressors,
these sickening you to bone,

You tend to your wounds,
and smile at the dead.
Your losses mean nothing,
people die and cultures end.
you live on the same as before,
and your people locked in misery.


KHADGAR
 
Soron said:
okay Sam......
you know what Sam got in the story too don't you? :devil:

Mmmm yeah! lol...

She got off easy, didn't she?

:D
 
Khadgar,

That is an awesome piece of prose!

I'm really impressed!

:devil:
 
Some 'Mild' Evil Prose

Something for the Halloween season...

THE RAVEN
by: Edgar Allan Poe

Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary,
Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore,
While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping,
As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door.
"'Tis some visitor," I muttered, "tapping at my chamber door-
Only this, and nothing more."

Ah, distinctly I remember it was in the bleak December,
And each separate dying ember wrought its ghost upon the floor.
Eagerly I wished the morrow;- vainly I had sought to borrow
From my books surcease of sorrow- sorrow for the lost Lenore-
For the rare and radiant maiden whom the angels name Lenore-
Nameless here for evermore.

And the silken sad uncertain rustling of each purple curtain
Thrilled me- filled me with fantastic terrors never felt before;
So that now, to still the beating of my heart, I stood repeating,
"'Tis some visitor entreating entrance at my chamber door-
Some late visitor entreating entrance at my chamber door;-
This it is, and nothing more."

Presently my soul grew stronger; hesitating then no longer,
"Sir," said I, "or Madam, truly your forgiveness I implore;
But the fact is I was napping, and so gently you came rapping,
And so faintly you came tapping, tapping at my chamber door,
That I scarce was sure I heard you"- here I opened wide the door;-
Darkness there, and nothing more.

Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering,
fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;
But the silence was unbroken, and the stillness gave no token,
And the only word there spoken was the whispered word, "Lenore!"
This I whispered, and an echo murmured back the word, "Lenore!"-
Merely this, and nothing more.

Back into the chamber turning, all my soul within me burning,
Soon again I heard a tapping somewhat louder than before.
"Surely," said I, "surely that is something at my window lattice:
Let me see, then, what thereat is, and this mystery explore-
Let my heart be still a moment and this mystery explore;-
'Tis the wind and nothing more."

Open here I flung the shutter, when, with many a flirt and
flutter,
In there stepped a stately raven of the saintly days of yore;
Not the least obeisance made he; not a minute stopped or stayed
he;
But, with mien of lord or lady, perched above my chamber door-
Perched upon a bust of Pallas just above my chamber door-
Perched, and sat, and nothing more.

Then this ebony bird beguiling my sad fancy into smiling,
By the grave and stern decorum of the countenance it wore.
"Though thy crest be shorn and shaven, thou," I said, "art sure no
craven,
Ghastly grim and ancient raven wandering from the Nightly shore-
Tell me what thy lordly name is on the Night's Plutonian shore!"
Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."

Much I marvelled this ungainly fowl to hear discourse so plainly,
Though its answer little meaning- little relevancy bore;
For we cannot help agreeing that no living human being
Ever yet was blest with seeing bird above his chamber door-
Bird or beast upon the sculptured bust above his chamber door,
With such name as "Nevermore."

But the raven, sitting lonely on the placid bust, spoke only
That one word, as if his soul in that one word he did outpour.
Nothing further then he uttered- not a feather then he fluttered-
Till I scarcely more than muttered, "other friends have flown
before-
On the morrow he will leave me, as my hopes have flown before."
Then the bird said, "Nevermore."

Startled at the stillness broken by reply so aptly spoken,
"Doubtless," said I, "what it utters is its only stock and store,
Caught from some unhappy master whom unmerciful Disaster
Followed fast and followed faster till his songs one burden bore-
Till the dirges of his Hope that melancholy burden bore
Of 'Never- nevermore'."

But the Raven still beguiling all my fancy into smiling,
Straight I wheeled a cushioned seat in front of bird, and bust and
door;
Then upon the velvet sinking, I betook myself to linking
Fancy unto fancy, thinking what this ominous bird of yore-
What this grim, ungainly, ghastly, gaunt and ominous bird of yore
Meant in croaking "Nevermore."

This I sat engaged in guessing, but no syllable expressing
To the fowl whose fiery eyes now burned into my bosom's core;
This and more I sat divining, with my head at ease reclining
On the cushion's velvet lining that the lamplight gloated o'er,
But whose velvet violet lining with the lamplight gloating o'er,
She shall press, ah, nevermore!

Then methought the air grew denser, perfumed from an unseen censer
Swung by Seraphim whose footfalls tinkled on the tufted floor.
"Wretch," I cried, "thy God hath lent thee- by these angels he
hath sent thee
Respite- respite and nepenthe, from thy memories of Lenore!
Quaff, oh quaff this kind nepenthe and forget this lost Lenore!"
Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."

"Prophet!" said I, "thing of evil!- prophet still, if bird or
devil!-
Whether Tempter sent, or whether tempest tossed thee here ashore,
Desolate yet all undaunted, on this desert land enchanted-
On this home by horror haunted- tell me truly, I implore-
Is there- is there balm in Gilead?- tell me- tell me, I implore!"
Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."

"Prophet!" said I, "thing of evil- prophet still, if bird or
devil!
By that Heaven that bends above us- by that God we both adore-
Tell this soul with sorrow laden if, within the distant Aidenn,
It shall clasp a sainted maiden whom the angels name Lenore-
Clasp a rare and radiant maiden whom the angels name Lenore."
Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."

"Be that word our sign in parting, bird or fiend," I shrieked,
upstarting-
"Get thee back into the tempest and the Night's Plutonian shore!
Leave no black plume as a token of that lie thy soul hath spoken!
Leave my loneliness unbroken!- quit the bust above my door!
Take thy beak from out my heart, and take thy form from off my
door!"
Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."

And the Raven, never flitting, still is sitting, still is sitting
On the pallid bust of Pallas just above my chamber door;
And his eyes have all the seeming of a demon's that is dreaming,
And the lamplight o'er him streaming throws his shadow on the
floor;
And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor
Shall be lifted- nevermore!
 
Poe did have a way with words...

"And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor
Shall be lifted- nevermore!"
 
Arden said:
Poe did have a way with words...

"And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor
Shall be lifted- nevermore!"

you're so sexy when you talk Evil like that. :devil:
 
SLIPPIN' INTO DARKNESS

Remember this?

SLIPPIN' INTO DARKNESS
War


Slippin´ into darkness
Take my mind beyond the dreams
I was slippin´ into darkness
Take my mind beyond the dreams

Where I talk to my brother, oh, oh, oh
Who never said their name

Slippin´ into darkness
When I heard my mother say
I was slippin´ into darkness
When I heard my mother say
(Hey, what´d she say, what´d she say)

You been slippin´ into darkness, oh, oh, oh
Pretty soon you´re gonna pay

oh, oh, oh, oh


 
absolutely nothing. sing it again.



thanks for the compliments. i like it, it's one of my beter ones, of course, i don't keep the crap ones, but you know what i mean.
 
Khadgar said:
absolutely nothing. sing it again.



thanks for the compliments. i like it, it's one of my beter ones, of course, i don't keep the crap ones, but you know what i mean.

You're welcome!


I figured you to be younger... how do you know War?
(geeze, I'm in my 40s)

:D

PS... you beat Soron to the answer! lol...
 
war is the enemy of all mankind
the thought of war just blows my mind


what answer was that darlin'?
:rose:
 
*laughs* come on! everyone knows war!



really? 40? cool.


how did you figure me to be younger?
 
war unifies a country, makes it strong, and gives it a beter economy, wether it wins or loses, the only downlide to war, is that poeple die. other than that, the entire country benifits from it. and of course property destruction....
 
Soron said:
war is the enemy of all mankind
the thought of war just blows my mind


what answer was that darlin'?
:rose:

"ZZZZzzzzzzzzzz"
Oh, are you talking to me?
*rubbing her eyes*

:D
 
Khadgar said:
*laughs* come on! everyone knows war!

really? 40? cool.

how did you figure me to be younger?

Shhhhh! 45.

I thought the Av placed you in the 20-30+ bracket... of which many wouldn't know the song "War."
 
Khadgar said:
war unifies a country, makes it strong, and gives it a beter economy, wether it wins or loses, the only downlide to war, is that poeple die. other than that, the entire country benifits from it. and of course property destruction....

Oooh, be careful. You are right, but you tempt me to say evil things about sonny boy bush.

:devil:

I've gotta take my butt to bed, it's really late Eastern time... I loved the poem, though! Bring some more if you can!

'Night!
 
The only thing Evil today is my *ucking computer!!!!!!
Damn thing!
 
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