Jackie.Hikaru
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Noticed a string of one bombs on my story after today's sweep 

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That's cold! So many Lit readers with all the taste of an American remake of a foreign sit-com.Noticed a string of one bombs on my story after today's sweep![]()
Noticed a string of one bombs on my story after today's sweep![]()
I'd be willing to bet that the majority of readers have no idea that the chapter rule even exists.I think this plays somewhat into the debate about what is a chapter story versus a series story, and where readers' expectations might be with contest entries.
In your author notes for "Valentine's Dance", you state: "For readers of We're a Wonderful Wife this story occurs about a half of the way into Chapter 4."
To me, this hints at your entry not being the stand-alone story that the contest rules specify, or what I would expect for a contest. I don't think I was alone in this, and, while I rated your story a 5* effort, it may have suffered from other readers being confused.
Keep in mind, details that you as an author think are redundant in series stories can be enlightening to readers new to your work. Author notes directing readers back to previous stories are not a substitute for basic details about characters or plot that are carry-overs from other works. For example, describing what a character looks like once in a series is probably not enough if you are now in the fifth or sixth part of the series.
Readers should be expected to start at the beginning of chapter stories where they get the benefit of the developing plot and characters. With series stories, readers expect to be able to start anywhere. I treat stories in a universe the same as series stories.
I do my best to laugh it off but every one bomb I get makes that little puppy inside my soul whimper.LOL. Let me tell you about one bombs and competitions sometime, Jackie.A few years ago I had a story in, and the first 50 votes were, literally, all 5 stars, and then the one bombs came.....all the way down to about 3.5 - this was when I was new here, and it was sooooo traumatic. Now I just laugh. Whatever.....
Thanks! And congrats to the other winners and all who participated. As always there were alot of very enjoyable stories. Happy Call in Single Day everyoneCongratulations to the winners, and to all those who are satisfied with how their contribution(s) worked out.
Congratulations to the winners, and to all those who are satisfied with how their contribution(s) worked out.
Probably not, but they would quickly recognize that they knew nothing about characters whose entire development occurred someplace other than within the story that they were reading.I'd be willing to bet that the majority of readers have no idea that the chapter rule even exists.
Another thing to keep in mind:Something for future entrants to keep in mind. Once again the story has to be very long to have a good chance to place in a themed contest here. Once again, all of the placers in this contest were long, running from seven to twelve Lit. pages. The voting here is set up to favor the long works for high ratings. My best-rated stories in this contest also were the ones that went to several pages.
Just the way it is as Lit. voting is constructed here. So, it's best if you're entering the contest with a one-to-three Lit. page work knowing you are doing so just for the extra exposure and to be part of a writing exercise, not with a likelihood of placing.
I submitted later than I would have liked, on February 1st, and my story was published the next day. As of the end of the contest, it had fewer views (about 11,800) in comparison to some of my past entries submitted earlier in such contests but more votes (about 1 vote per 20 views, one of my best performances on that ratio) and helped me pick up 20-something followers. While I finished a few hundredths behind the winners in the score, that was a win in my view.SNI
There were stories submitted at the beginning of the contest that received very respectable scores and almost more than ten times the views of those that won.
That is a trade off that writers might want to consider. More views doesn't ensure greater or higher votes, but it does mean that your work is likely exposed more readers during the contest period. Less time for consideration by readers could result in "quality" views over quantity.
Does anyone know what the winning scores were? Had to be 4.89 or more.While I finished a few hundredths behind the winners in the score, that was a win in my view.
Star-Crossed was 4.92Does anyone know what the winning scores were? Had to be 4.89 or more.