T Teflon Virgin Joined Dec 15, 1999 Posts 5 Dec 15, 1999 #1 If anyone could give me some feed back on my new stories: The Office Just Good Friends The Baby-sitter I would be grateful for any comments, bearing in mind they are my first stories. Cheers
If anyone could give me some feed back on my new stories: The Office Just Good Friends The Baby-sitter I would be grateful for any comments, bearing in mind they are my first stories. Cheers
B Butterfly Experienced Joined Nov 20, 1999 Posts 97 Dec 15, 1999 #2 Read "Just Good Friends" and enjoyed it. Put together and written well. Had me visualizing the scenes and that to me makes it great. I'll catch the other two, but keep up the good work.
Read "Just Good Friends" and enjoyed it. Put together and written well. Had me visualizing the scenes and that to me makes it great. I'll catch the other two, but keep up the good work.
H HSWriter Guest Dec 16, 1999 #3 The babysitter was very good. I would like to see more just like it.
