The Newest Domination story on literotica

[DeeVeeAnt]

I've just submitted my first literotica story after being an avid reader for years, and surprisingly enough, it was a domination story. I'm not actively into domination, this was a fantasy I finally wrote down, and I just wanted to hear from the hardcore Dom/mes out there if I did okay, got stuff right, etc. I'd much appreciate any comments on the story. Not here, but in the feedback section. Meanwhile, while I have your attention, is there a cream or something of the sort in existence that will make a girl horny but not itchy? And what is the best position for a sub to show her subservience, on all fours, r on knees with hands knotted behind neck or lower back? Ok I'm done.

 

[Chicklet]

I've just submitted my first literotica story after being an avid reader for years, and surprisingly enough, it was a domination story.

Congratulations, when it's posted put a link up in the story feedback section, and a link to that thread on this thread, and I'd be happy to tell you what I think.

Meanwhile, while I have your attention, is there a cream or something of the sort in existence that will make a girl horny but not itchy?

I don't know exactly what you mean, but you might want to read the figging threads?

And what is the best position for a sub to show her subservience, on all fours, r on knees with hands knotted behind neck or lower back?

This, I think, would be a matter of opinion.

 

[DeeVeeAnt]

I don't know exactly what you mean, but you might want to read the figging threads?

What's Figging?

Thanks for the rest of your prompt advice.

 

[greenmands]

Best position for showing respect by a sub to a Dom/me , is whatever position the Dom/me says it is.

 

[DeeVeeAnt]

*giggle* Well, there isn't exactly a dom/me in the picture, now is there? It was just asked out of curiousity, in case one did come into the picture. *lowers eyes and smiles*

 

[DeeVeeAnt]

oh, THAT'S figging. wow. I may have to try that.

 

[Chicklet]

I had my first figging last night...

So has anyone tried "figging"?

here you go = )

 

[DeeVeeAnt]

So NOT into pain. I mean, spanking and paddling.... that's as high as my tolerance goes. I actually don't know if I could handle figging. Hmmm. we shall have to see.

 

[Joe Schmoe]

You got me curious...post a link. I want to read it.

 

[Red Sonja]

I've just submitted my first literotica story after being an avid reader for years, and surprisingly enough, it was a domination story. I'm not actively into domination, this was a fantasy I finally wrote down, and I just wanted to hear from the hardcore Dom/mes out there if I did okay, got stuff right, etc. I'd much appreciate any comments on the story. Not here, but in the feedback section. Meanwhile, while I have your attention, is there a cream or something of the sort in existence that will make a girl horny but not itchy? And what is the best position for a sub to show her subservience, on all fours, r on knees with hands knotted behind neck or lower back? Ok I'm done.

Have you tried a warming lube? Like a warming massage lotion, you could browse the aisles at the drug store... That I find kind of fun...

My Dom seems to prefer the on my knees with my head down to the floor, ass up position with hands behind my back for a submission pose... but keep in mind whatever the Dom/me you are with wants is the right pose

*edited to remove typo* (wouldn't want any complaints about my english *

 

[@}-}rebecca----]

Best position for showing respect by a sub to a Dom/me , is whatever position the Dom/me says it is.

I agree with the above totally. Though for the sake of the Story I would suggest the following:

Kneeling to his right , tushy resting on heels, knees slightly open (so there is a 'view'), hands resting on thighs palms up, eyes lowered (yes ..lol..saw you have that already) back straight and nekkidddddddddddddddddddddddd.

Best of Luck

 

[amasterfound]

Here is a link to positions for slaves

http://www.albanypowerexchange.com/TPE/positions.htm

As to which position is best that depends on who the master is and who the slave is, AND what the situation is. Whether it is waiting for inspection, punishment or waiting for orders, etc.

 

[Joe Schmoe]

*edited to remove typo* (wouldn't want any complaints about my english *

Red, don't sweat your english. It's pretty damn good in my book. It's my native tongue and even I have problems with it at times.

 

[DeeVeeAnt]

story

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=230206

 

[alice_underneath]

I just wanted to hear from the hardcore Dom/mes out there if I did okay, got stuff right, etc.

Are you asking if this is a stimulating fantasy, or are you asking if the story is realistic?

I would be very interested to read responses to both those questions from anyone who is active in this lifestyle.

I read your story, and would like to congratulate you on your writing style - especially considering that this is your first piece. Your grammar, syntax, descriptions, and editing are all good.

[Although I do have one question. How long are her arms? Read it again to see why I'm asking! ]

As for the content... well... let's just say that from my perspective, "Dick" is aptly named! It didn't work for me as fantasy - but I'm guessing that my fantasies would bore you to tears, so we're even!

Thanks for sharing your story.
Alice

 

[DeeVeeAnt]

Are you asking if this is a stimulating fantasy, or are you asking if the story is realistic?

A little bit of both, I'd say, although what I'm really asking is not if the story taken as a whole is realistic, but rather if the details related to BDSM were correct in their implications. Obviously, much of the story is pure fantasy.

I read your story, and would like to congratulate you on your writing style - especially considering that this is your first piece. Your grammar, syntax, descriptions, and editing are all good.

Thank you very much That means a lot to me.

[Although I do have one question. How long are her arms? Read it again to see why I'm asking! ]

Oh! Well, being loosely based on personal experimentation with THIS particular aspect, Jane has long arms. That is to say, it is possible, it's been done It's not comfortable, but her clit can be reached with her hands even though they're restrained behind her back. I should note that the restraints used in the experiment AND in the story are leather cuffs that fasten with a long metal clip. They can be fastened and removed by the person wearing them pretty easily, and they allow quite a bit of movement. Pretty, not practical.

Thanks so much for your comments and for reading the story. Dick was quite deliberately named

-DeeVeeAnt

 

[DeeVeeAnt]

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By the way, here is a picture of me.