The Loving Wives genre. A redneck's view.

[Octavian]

Now I don't want no one to think I'm not sensitive. Hell, I always put the bog seat down after I piss. I did it to start with because it saved having to wipe up any drips but then I found out that Marylou thought it showed I was real considerate and fuck me if that aint the truth.

But don't let me catch anyone with my Marylou. I won't be responsible for my actions if any male gets within six feet of her. I'm not the jealous type, I just don't like her being with other men. Why should she need to when she has me? God, that girl is so lucky that I'm not one of those wimp husbands, you know the sort of pathetic individuals who try to understand women, or worse still, make allowances if they devitt devite fuck it, if they stray from the straight and narrow. No sir! Any women of mine doing that would be history. Being the sensitive type I would listen to her but then I would dump the fucking slut bitch.

Do you know this place is full of these wimps too? You can't read the new story page wihout coming across these assholes. But I fix them. I tell them what shite they rite and that there wife is a cumsucking slut what deserves to be called a hore. Do you know that some of 'em even rite about there wife having sex with someone else WITH THERE HUSBAND WATCHING! Can you believe that?

That Octavian is the worse their is. Never mind that he hasn't even finished his pathetic story. I seen enough to no that it is rubish. Now I no I can't rite but I sure can crittisise, kriticksize bollocks, find fault with any story if it happens to put forwards views what I don't agree with. This is a fucking democrasy, after all.

 

[NoJo]

Remember, Oct, weak men fantasize about being strong and dominant -- the last thing they want is to see their fears in print.

 

[Black Tulip]

This is a fucking democrasy, after all.

LOL

Nice piece Octavian.

Especially the operative word in that last sentence: fucking.

 

[Guest]

Yep, very cool piece of writing there, Oct. Made me laugh! And, I bet it would get some great voting scores from them.

Lou

 

[pop_54]

Yeppers, sure do agree with yu Mr Oct, damn wimpy hommosexual preverts, wanting to watch their own wife riding Trigger.

 

[Pookie]

That Octavian fella likes to write stories about wives that enjoy sex, even if the person she's having sex with isn't her husband. He just doesn't understand that we wimmin folk don't like sex. No decent woman would enjoy sex. That's just wrong, doncha know? Sex is just a necessary evil so that we can birth some babies for our strong, hard working, and loving husbands. *nods*