The Gardener's Daughter.

[Rabbit108]

Hi ,I would like to know what members think of my stories, I have 5 published on this site.
I am trying to learn the proper way to present and write, any help or advice will be gladly recieved.

thanks
les

 

[poohlive]

I just wanted to say, I read a few of your pieces. I liked them, I wish you could be a little more deatiled about a few parts, but other than that it is all gold buddy. Keep it up.

 

[poohlive]

Come on people, review this one, I liked it. At least give him the benefit of the doubt.

 

[Rabbit108]

Thanks Poohlive, I am willing to try anything that other authors suggest so I dont mind any comments good or bad, I have to learn by my mistakes.

les

 

[Whispersecret]

For future reference, it helps if you post a link directly to your story from here. I'll look at "Gardener's Daughter" when I get a chance. But be prepared for me to be blunt. I've made more than one author unhappy.

 

[poohlive]

Well, that is how authors get better. They need brutal editors. I would actually hate it if I gave someone a story, a raw unedited one, and then was told it was perfect.
Anyway, don't take it too personally Rabbit. You will just know what to do better next time.

 

[ANiceGuy]

Keep writing!!!

Your doing Great! I loved The Gardner's Daughter!!!

ANiceGuy

Ps and I'm not just saying that to be nice.