The Female Orgasm

[AsylumSeeker]

To be honest, to make my writing more credible, I would appreciate some input here from women.

Below is how I describe a female orgasm, based on my limited experience and what I have read. Yeah, I know, I'm opening myself up to the people who will ridicule me for not being one to deliver multiple orgasms. Okay, bracing myself for that.

I would like my stories to be as realistic as possible. Anyone who has read my stories knows that I strive to be realistic, at least in most cases (yeah, there was that twins thing).


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A few moments later it didn’t matter. I found my rhythm that night, teaching that young dame a few lessons about loving an older man. Grasping her wrists, pinning them to the mattress just above her head, I rammed all of me into her hot, wet center, giving her deep kisses that would’ve knocked her socks off if she’d been wearing any.

Her thighs widened, calves wrapping around my waist, her hips thrusting upward to meet mine. I did my level best to keep things quiet, and Alice did the same, but that damn bed frame wouldn’t shut up! But I wasn’t about to let that annoying noise keep me from showing her what a man with experience could do in bed.

I loved her body as best I had anyone else, cock sliding out before plunging fully inside, her pussy taking all of me as it wrapped around my width. I drove her lithe form into the mattress, grinding myself into her wet flesh as she softly moaned her pleasure, pulling me into her with all the strength her legs had to offer.

I kept reminding her she was helplessly pinned beneath me by squeezing my hands around her wrists from time to time. I think the dame liked that, knowing she couldn’t get away from me even if she’d wanted to. She sure as hell acted like it as her body frantically fucked me back, her flowing nectar soaking us both and the sheet underneath along with it.

Alice was really having a high time, making the best of our first and only night together, pulling out all the stops. A few minutes later I felt her wildly bucking and I knew she was savoring a climax as her pussy constricted around my driving hardness. She really gave it a good soaking as she rode the wave of ecstasy for all it was worth.

But I wasn’t done, hell no, not yet. I was determined to give this dame a memory she could think back on with sincere appreciation. Once her violent spasms diminished she got the best of me and wrestled me onto my back, staying on my cock without skipping a beat. I wasn’t exactly sure how she’d managed that little trick but I wasn’t complaining, no sir.

She leaned forward while straddling my crotch, bringing those tits within my reach. I took advantage, squeezing them within my hands as my fingers fondled the firm swells and teased the pulsing, diamond-hard tips.

Damn, this young dame has a nice body, I couldn’t help from thinking over and over again as my rigid cock impaled her. Maybe this was how karma paid a guy back for doing its handiwork. No complaints from me.

Her sweaty, overheated body continued riding my mighty cock. I nearly toppled her a few times and had to briefly move my hands from her breasts to her waist in order to steady her unbalanced body until she corrected.

A short time later a second orgasm took hold, sending her over the edge. The way she was feverishly grinding herself against my cock pulled me along with her. Just as her climax was ending mine began. Trying to stifle my voice I instead issued heavy panting sounds as I began violently twitching beneath her, giving this dame what her body craved, all she could handle.


*****

Just in case that was a scene from In The Dark of Night, a story about interracial sex.

Okay, so it was a plug. Guilty.

 

[LaRascasse]

Since we're on the subject of what an orgasm really is like...

Cameron: Sex *could* kill you. Do you know what the human body goes through when you have sex? Pupils dilate, arteries constrict, core temperature rises, heart races, blood pressure skyrockets, respiration becomes rapid and shallow, the brain fires bursts of electrical impulses from nowhere to nowhere, and secretions spit out of every gland, and the muscles tense and spasm like you're lifting three times your body weight. It's violent. It's ugly. And it's messy. And if God hadn't made it *unbelievably* fun, the human race would have died out eons ago. Men are lucky they can only have one orgasm. You know that women can have an hour long orgasm?

 

[Darkniciad]

When you're writing from the perspective of someone observing the orgasm ( as in the example ) I don't think there's really any right or wrong. Every woman is going to respond differently to climax.

As long as it's physically possible for her to do what you're writing, it's within the realm of possibility and realistic enough - from the woman who barely moves or makes a sound to the wailing banshee who flails about as if half a dozen demented puppet-masters are fighting over her strings.

( Filing that last line away because I know I'm eventually going to find the right story to use it in *laugh* )

 

[Handley_Page]

Take a look at a website called "I feel Me"

PS. We had a long discussion about this very subject no too long ago. I suggest you do a search and find it

 

[lovecraft68]

Cameron: Sex *could* kill you. Do you know what the human body goes through when you have sex? Pupils dilate, arteries constrict, core temperature rises, heart races, blood pressure skyrockets, respiration becomes rapid and shallow, the brain fires bursts of electrical impulses from nowhere to nowhere, and secretions spit out of every gland, and the muscles tense and spasm like you're lifting three times your body weight. It's violent. It's ugly. And it's messy. And if God hadn't made it *unbelievably* fun, the human race would have died out eons ago. Men are lucky they can only have one orgasm. You know that women can have an hour long orgasm?

And this is why the orgasm is referred to as La Petite Mort.

I asked my wife before if she could in detail describe her orgasm. She said it was hard to do, but next time she had one she would try to focus on it and describe it.

After she did I asked and her answer was,

Oh, umm, I forgot to pay attention, but you can try again.

 

[3113]

To be honest, to make my writing more credible, I would appreciate some input here from women.

Um, why? It's all from the man's p.o.v. If you had it from the woman's p.o.v. then I'd understand why you'd want input. But why does it matter what an orgasm feels like to a woman given that all you've got here is a man watching a woman having an orgasm?

Wouldn't the input you really need be that of men who've had sex with women and watched them orgasm?

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Guys? Think about peeing. The process is the same but not so intense, tho it could be.

Libido increase. Tension increase. Preoccupation with finding the right circumstances for release of libido and tension, and the joyous release when it comes. Fucking with her orgasm is like not stopping for her to pee when her body is tormented for the blessed relief.

 

[jomar]

What 3113 said.

I didn't get "She gave it a good soaking..." until you used the word "dame." Then I figured it fit in a noir type thing.

 

[Dyslexicea]

Since we're on the subject of what an orgasm really is like...

Cameron: Sex *could* kill you. Do you know what the human body goes through when you have sex? Pupils dilate, arteries constrict, core temperature rises, heart races, blood pressure skyrockets, respiration becomes rapid and shallow, the brain fires bursts of electrical impulses from nowhere to nowhere, and secretions spit out of every gland, and the muscles tense and spasm like you're lifting three times your body weight. It's violent. It's ugly. And it's messy. And if God hadn't made it *unbelievably* fun, the human race would have died out eons ago. Men are lucky they can only have one orgasm. You know that women can have an hour long orgasm?

Men are lucky they can only have one orgasm.

This could only have been written by a very stupid man!

You know that women can have an hour long orgasm?

Makes you jealous doesn't it?

Wouldn't the input you really need be that of men who've had sex with women and watched them orgasm?

I'd agree but knowing men they'd most likely get it wrong or their penis centered and never saw a woman have an orgasm. Maybe better advice would be to ask those of us who have actually given a woman an orgasm.