DanDelaware
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- Apr 1, 2017
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An otherwise excellent fantasy story kept using "orgasm" as a verb and it bugged me every time. I like "cum" as a verb, or "come" if you want something less vulgar. You can write around it of course, replacing "she orgasmed her brains out" with "her orgasm was mind-shattering" but sometimes a good verb is needed.