My third installment of an ongoing story was just approved. I was hoping to get some feedback from you scholars of erotic literature.
The main theme is masturbation with friends. Over the course of the last few submissions, the stories of the characters have evolved to include sexual encounters outside of their comfort zone. I plan to eventually keep the momentum going and eventually take the story much further. Any input would be appreciated. Thanks.
The most recent submission: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=505407
The main theme is masturbation with friends. Over the course of the last few submissions, the stories of the characters have evolved to include sexual encounters outside of their comfort zone. I plan to eventually keep the momentum going and eventually take the story much further. Any input would be appreciated. Thanks.
The most recent submission: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=505407