The Dancer, a Goose, and some handcuffs...

[Evesdemise]

Ahem...Am I on??
Let me know if any of you have gotten a chance to check out my work submitted here. You can find it on the Authors link of Stories and Pics under Eves Demise. Post back here if you read any of it. Every writer needs feedback, even editors. No...ESPECIALLY editors, because we burn out our spellcheck doing all that editing for other writers. j/k. Thanks.

 

[poohlive]

I read your work man, and I am http://smilecwm.tripod.com/net/boldred.giffor joy. This stuff rocks, you should do more, I would love to read more.

 

[Evesdemise]

To a Jumping Pooh...

Poohlive--Thanks for the great feedback. Even if you had posted that you hated it, I would still be happy to know that I had gotten some feedback. Getting this kind was more than I expected. Thanks again. In answer to your question, I have just sent the second installment of The Dancer, and so it will be up soon (hope hope), and I have just finished the written installment of part two What's Good for the Goose. Again, thanks for the feedback, and now I gotta go and see what a great writer I must be posting to. Are you in the Author's link, and under Poohlive? I am interested, and besides, I want to put a lil' jumping M&M in my feedback post to you. (How do you do that, anyway?)
Lots of questions, and many thanks to you, Pooh.

 

[poohlive]

Well, you are very welcome. I look forward to reading the sequel. I am not in the athor's listings yet, I do look forward to submitting a story I have already though. I think it is good enough for this site, just waiting to edit some more, lol.
As for how I got a jumping ball onto the site? Well there is a website, if you have aol, I can give you a link, my address is the same as this one, Poohlive@aol.com. Otherwise go here, it has tones pof pictures, tells you exactly what to do smilecwm.tripod.comhttp://smilecwm.tripod.com/owen/council.gif
there are lots.... lots... of pictures

 

[Evesdemise]

I love the jumping M&M--darnit, now I am hungry

Poohlive--I, unfortunately, don't have AOL. Wish I did, but I don't. But thanks for telling me about it. I still think it is cool. As I say, the next installment to "The Dancer" is already on Laurel and Manu's desk(s), and I just have to get past the carpal tunnel to get the rest of the "Goose" installment onto Wordpad, and then emailing it to them. Thanks again for your great review. That, to me, is what makes it all worthwhile. About your story, please, if you want, or need any help with anything, let me know. I would be happy to help if I can. You seem to have things pretty well in hand, though, but I thought I would offer anyway. Also, while I have you on the line, can you answer the kind of question I should be embarrassed to ask? When I read posts from authors who want feedback, how can I find their stuff? I look under Author Index, under the nic they use in their posts, but I can't find any of them. I want to be able to review stories and encourage people like others(including you) do here. Thanks in advance.

 

[poohlive]

I am vey flattered, there are tons of pages on that site for little smile thingies, it is fun actually trying to use them all, lol.
I would like to send my story to you, it is a bit long, I sent it to another person who says it is good, but I always want another opinion. If you give me your e mail address i can send it to you.
Back to the other question, I am not sure exactly how to get the authors stories. Most people put a reference or address or something to tell where their story is. Like under fetish or something, if they don't, I am not sure, exactly.
Well, I can't wait to read the next installment, eager as pie, well I guess pie isn't all that eager, how abouthttp://smilecwm.tripod.com/net/ukliam2.gif wow, now that's eager, lol. Thanks for writing