The beginning of an idea...

Rebel Rose

Edge of a Broken Heart
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It's been ages since I've written, and recently I've been waiting for a fresh idea to hit me. Yes, I've got a few partial stories that I should finish, and more than a few ideas in a list... but I can't seem to get motivated to work on any of those... yet.

Ok, so then...

*lightbulb moment*

Woman, mid 30s, Man, early 40s ... great sexual relationship, live together... blah blah blah

One day man gets called into work... woman thinks she's got the house to herself all day

Man's 2 young adult sons (18-22) stop by and catch her
in the act....

doing what? I don't want it to be having sex with someone else....
but... she was sunbathing/swimming nakid?
masturbating on cam?

The sons "black mail" her into having sex with them or they'll tell dad?
Or do they "force" her to have sex with them?

Does Dad come home and catch them? Is he mad? Or does he join in?

Or do they all keep it secret?


The lightbulb only burned bright for a few seconds. :rolleyes:
 
Hmmmmm, OK, just putting this out there for your perusal, but say, she just finished her period so hasn't had sex in a week, about to get down to it when he gets called into work, she drapes a robe on and goes and sits in the sun.

Of course she is still horny and the summer air brings to mind the last time they had sex in the pool, she closes her eyes, pulls the robe open and starts exploring about halfway toward that big O his sons come into the backyard and come up to her and start kissing her, sucking on her breasts, she is to horny to say no very well and they have their way with her.

Now I'm not sure on the rest, I'm half drawn to he comes home and catches them and joins in and half drawn to they finish off before he comes home and she takes a shower while they leave, he comes home and joins her in the shower for more.

Either one of those can be turned into a series as well. ;)
 
I like your idea on how to start the story...
all sexed up and no one to blow. :devil:

Thanks for your input. :D

Would like to get more ideas for this story from others.
*hint hint*
*ahem sirhugs* :p
 
RR = I'll pass on the blow. . .;) but you can whisper in my ear if it makes ya feel good. ;)

If you're thinking blackmail, then I don't see the masturbating or nude sunbathing thing working UNLESS - she's doing it on cam. Perhaps she is seen doing that, but how do these guys know she doesn't have hub's permission. Perhaps they "break in" and see her past emails and such... Maybe over a period of time they witness her behavior and then present their evidence to her.
 
On cam

On cam is a good idea, but it would be better if you made it to where the sons knew beforehand, and so that it was part of a plan on their part instead of just happenstance, and so they choose a time when the husband will not be around for a few hours.

I'm always accepting for a girl who wants someone to blow
 
If she's realllly horny, why don't the sons literally break in. Observe her sunbathing, her notes and all, dress as thieves, break in and threaten her having sex with her... one holds, the other fucks, ooh, get it all on tape, THEN comes the blackmail with the tape of them... a steady, nightly sexathon when the father is known to be away... after awhile, she doesn't care about the tape, she's so used to getting some at a certain hour... how bout that?
 
*sigh*

Well, I've thot about it (yeah... that's the burning smell you've noticed in the air)

I think first of all I'm only going to have one son in the story ... I don't think I'm up to the task of making 2 sons seem realistic enough.

I'm still not sure what she's going to be doing to be blackmailed. Ugh. :rolleyes: I like all the ideas everyone's posted, but nothing really clicks. Maybe I just need to write... and rewrite, and rewrite... 'til something I like comes out. Sometimes when I'm writing I get another idea of something that would work better and it's totally different from what I had originally planned.

Am I rambling? I think so.... It's about 4:15 AM and I haven't been to bed yet... :rolleyes:

Maybe I'll think on this some more and post when I can actually focus, after I've had some sleep.
 
Rebel Rose said:
Ok... who do I gotta blow to get some input here?
*giggles*

I'd never pass on a friendly blow.....

will post more later

(what a tease!)
 
the more. later....

I liked the idea of two sons, maybe because I like dialogue, and two of them could talk to each other as they watch the step mom.

In addidtion, you can give them contrasting aspects. One has secretly lusted for her ever since first time Dad introduced them. Other just never looked at her - maybe he was away a lot, blinded by younger hotties, or resented the "stepmonster" totally.

My version would differ from other posters. I would havethem come home and see her live. she's not cheating, but is masturbating, watching the neighbour(s). not sure if its a daughter the sons' age, a couple, or another young male. each has reasons.

If its a gal she's turned on by, that could be the blackmail angle- telling Dad she likes women. Might lead to a twist ending when we learn that dad LIKES the fact she likes women. Also angles re the young woman's relationship with the sons.

The young male neighbour would of course be a surrogate for the sons, and when she moans one of their names, they have inspiration, but also rivallry.

The watching the couple next door might havethe most 'smut' potential, but less plot driving force.

The boys jerk off watching, are embarassed with each other. As I think further, I think there is a second incident, less accidental. so you might use two different "objects" she watches. And this time, only one son watches. But is itthat son or his brother who confronts her with demands for sex? what happens next?
 
sirhugs said:
I'd never pass on a friendly blow.....

will post more later

(what a tease!)
I'm not a tease....


well only when I aim to please! ;)

Thanks for your input! :D I got lots to think about... I guess I better start writing, or at least trying to organize ideas. :rolleyes:
 
Rebel Rose said:
I'm not a tease....


well only when I aim to please! ;)

Thanks for your input! :D I got lots to think about... I guess I better start writing, or at least trying to organize ideas. :rolleyes:


I meant that I was being a tease, not thee...

I find that once I start writing, the plot usually unfolds on its own. If not, I toss a coin whenever I get to a juncture....
 
I tend to be a bit submissive, so in my mind I see the boys coming home and catching her masterbating. They watch her for a while and then get so worked up that they decide that they have to have her. Surprising her, they force her to have sex with them and at some point along the way to her horror, she finds herself enjoying it. Of course the boys are hung much bigger than their father and she can't get enough of these two young studs. In the end, they don't have to blackmail her to continue screwing them because she becomes their willing sex slave. Hubby eventually notices that she is not as tight as she used to be, and much more aggressive in bed and confronts her. She ties him up, tells him her little secret and then brings in her lovers so that he can watch her with them. There is a grand finale when she sits on his face so he can clean her pussy.
 
sirhugs said:
I meant that I was being a tease, not thee...
Oh... oops! :eek:
I've been a bit sleep deprived these days.

Not to mention a little deprived of other things... :rolleyes:
 
Rebel Rose said:
Ok... who do I gotta blow to get some input here?
*giggles*
ok, ok...I'll "volunteer" for the blow...LMAO

I don't like the idea that the sons knew in advance, since the story is that the got called in unexpectedly ... how would they know?

I like the idea that they have their way with her and they all cover it up, hubby joins her in the shower and they finish what they had intended.

In subsequent segments, the boys, having absconded with the video tape from the security camera, blackmail her into having sex repeatedly, one-on-one first and later two-on-one. To keep hubby from being suspicious, she gives him all he can handle as often as he can get it up.

Ultimately (months? years?) hubby finds out. What would be his reaction? Maybe he learns that she likes the multiple-on-one scenarios and joins in, since he didn't "lose" anything by her servicing of the boys. One big happy family.

Just a thought.
 
Rebel Rose said:
Oh... oops! :eek:
I've been a bit sleep deprived these days.

Not to mention a little deprived of other things... :rolleyes:


perhaps you need to take your query to your nearest coffee shop....
 
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