The bastard comes back

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Strangebuddy

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Years ago, a man had a one night stand after having a fight with his fiancé. The man forgot about his indiscretion but just a month from the wedding, the woman he slept with returns, with a much larger belly. While the woman just wants a promise of some financial support, he snaps and threatens her with legal action. The woman relents but when the baby is born she demands a DNA test. The man does one in secret but once the results come back positive, he threatens to use all his influence to have her deported and have the child taken from her. The woman is distraught but reluctantly accepts his offer of a lump payment and signing forms which frees him from any legal responsibility.

The man raises his own family, keeping the secret to himself. However his once prosperous company goes bankrupt and he finds himself unemployed and nearing the bottom of his bank account.

Suddenly, a man appears, representing an undisclosed party. An offer is made: if the family is willing to relocate overseas and take employment at a resort, they will be cared for and given a sizable amount of money.

The man at first refused, knowing who the man represents but after he has a heart attack, the rest of the family agrees even though the place they're going to has some objectionable laws. the family arrives and is separated into different rooms. They then receive letters explaining that the resort is owned by their disowned sibling.
 
And I'll go out on a limb and say the female members of the family are then transformed into sex slaves and are abused and degraded.

Why do I think that?

Just look around the forum.
 
Lol, I actually posted this in part as a litmus test to see whether people would post that type of idea or if they would go another route. I do have my own take but I'll see if anyone else posts firsts
 
Since there weren't any other posts, here's my take:

While the secret sibling does have a bit of resentment towards her family, she really just wanted to know them. There would be a number of red herrings thrown in which could lead some of the main characters to think they've committed incest but all the sex would be consensual and the real sibling would reveal her identity before sleeping with any of her family members.

There would be some light humiliation, with the family needing to participate in theme nights where they would have to dress up/down to fit a theme or work the casino floor in tight little outfits.
 
I figured the messenger would leave a distinctive memento from his former lover (A flower she shared a name with, or something from their date). His illegitimate child's mother could either have passed away so he just assumes it's his child or he could think that it is his former lover back for revenge, only for it to be his child.

Alternatively, the messenger could just drop a lot of hints that only the father would pick up on.
 
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