The BABYSITTER...

[SausageKing]

This is my first approved Chyoo story...any comments would appreciated...

Thanks.

heres the link...

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=c&story_id=1283

 

[jakelyon]

Nice Romp

It is a sexy, nasty rolicking story. Nice direct get to it sex which is fun.

I think it could have some interesting twists and turns. The only limit I see is that you set it at 2 threads maximum and you have already written two threads on several of the paths. This leaves not a lot of room for other writers to step in and add to your original idea.

Coming up with what the wife will do when she finds her husband doing it with an 18 year in the living room. She is going to be pissed that is for sure.

Anyway that is what I see.

 

[kendahl6969]

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ditto what jakelyon responded. Always have loved the babysitter stories

 

[SparkyMan]

Link to the story?

Add a link to the story so others can get to it quickly!

 

[SausageKing]

hmm

I must say, Im surprised at the lack of comments on my story. So any suggestions or, word of encouragement (nudge nudge) would be sooo appreciated.

 

[Brian21]

I love The Babysitter. It has to be one of my top 5 favorite stories here. I had lots of fun reading it, and I can't wait for additions. Also, let me know if you'd like me to contribute to it.